I love this story it is so much fun to read

(posted from Chapter Forty)

Beth readers:

I forgot to include a section of text in the published Chapter 43, so I'll be updating that chapter quite soon, but that will delay getting Chapter 44 published.

BF

The new version of Chapter 43 is up.

BF

She got between the island and me, snuggled her face into my crotch, then did something I could not figure out, although Rhee and Beth told me later that she had put his cock in her mouth to get him wet. ....( Since this is Beth telling the story how can she be telling herself anything.)....error...this does not compute! ;-).

(posted from Chapter Forty-five)

Ah. Thanks. I'll fix that.

BF

I find myself on edge until you post another chapter, I truly enjoy the story in all aspects.  The soccer team the friendships and the family interaction.  Please keep the chapters coming.

Don

(posted from Chapter Fifty)

Parts of Chapter 49 are repeated at the start of Chapter 50.

September 27, 2017 (Wednesday)

(posted from the Item Information Page)

As I enjoy this story, I wonder about birth control. I wonder if Sandy wants to see some babies. It is a wonderful story.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

bigro wrote:

As I enjoy this story, I wonder about birth control. I wonder if Sandy wants to see some babies. It is a wonderful story.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

Read the prologue again. Thanks for your kind words.

BF

Just an incredible story, the friendship that you show and love for each other between the characters make this so enjoyable to read.  I can't hardly wait for the next chapters.

my best
Don

(posted from Chapter Fifty-five)

donkeyside6543 wrote:

Just an incredible story, the friendship that you show and love for each other between the characters make this so enjoyable to read.  I can't hardly wait for the next chapters.

my best
Don

(posted from Chapter Fifty-five)

Thanks for reading and for your kind words.

BF

A possible editing 'miss':
"All of that got Rhee and Beth worked up on Dad’s mouth" - given that this is narrated by Beth & paragraph ends with Beth saying that "I would certainly have followed the four of them over the cliff", would I be correct in thinking it should be 'Rhee and Heather'?

(posted from Chapter Forty-five)

Indeed. I took the time to do a quick edit of the chapter and found other stuff that needed cleaning up.

Thanks,

BF

Chapter 64 of Beth is coming, but I've run into some snags in finding time to re-edit it and get it posted, mostly due to life outside of writing. It may well be another week yet.

BF

As allways I really enjoy this story and the way you are writing it, I find the story written as a diary is a form i truly enjoy reading.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Don

(posted from Chapter Sixty-four)

I forgot to add the bits from the Civia story into Chapters 61, 69, and 70. I've made those additions and re-uploaded those chapters. Nothing particularly significant to the overall story was part of those additions, but Civia's life becomes a bit more understandable in them.

Damn the emotions you can bring about is just amazing to me.  Well done

Don

(posted from Chapter Seventy-two)

I am loving this story (again).

I do have a query, though.

The first time I read this (over at the other site) I remember Sandy coming clean to Charlie about what started this whole new chapter in their lives.

But I don't seem to have spotted that this time around (and I'm up to chapter 60...)

Did I miss it?

Still a ways out, yet. Thanks for reading, again!

BF

Still find this story a must read and the new chapters each and every one of them make my day a little better Don

(posted from Chapter Eighty-six)

Thanks!

BF

I left a Civia bit out of Chapter 87 when I originally posted it. I've added the bit and re-posted that chapter.

BF

Chapters go from 86 to 88 skipping 87.

(posted from Chapter Eighty-seven)

Dadrepus wrote:

Chapters go from 86 to 88 skipping 87.

Actually, there are two Chapter 86's.  So Chapter 87 is Chapter 86 the Second.  You aren't "missing" a chapter, one of them is just mislabeled.

Eric Storm

Thanks, Dadrepus and Eric. All fixed now.

BF