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#1 2026-05-05 04:36:07
Justifications
Justifications
A single dad finds out that his daughter and her best friend have plans for him
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#2 2026-05-05 14:06:43
- JustLucky
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- Registered: 2021-10-11
- Posts: 75
Re: Justifications
Pretty damned good, the characters work well together, plots fairly original and I love the POV.
(posted from The morning after)
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#3 Yesterday 13:11:06
- JustLucky
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- Registered: 2021-10-11
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Re: Justifications
CHuckled my way through the PRM chapters, this is looking better and better with every chapter :-)
(posted from Dinner and Princesses)
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#4 Today 07:28:09
- kallisex
- Tipsy
- Registered: 2026-05-02
- Posts: 2
Re: Justifications
JustLucky wrote:
CHuckled my way through the PRM chapters, this is looking better and better with every chapter :-)
(posted from Dinner and Princesses)
Thanks. I feel like I'm shaking off the rust.
May go back and do some rewrites, to fix grammar and phrasing and stuff, while I've still got some time. Almost to a pretty decent save point. 
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