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Great chapter,keep it going!
(posted from chapter 2: First Taste)
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Ok kind of weird but it adds to the mistery
(posted from chapter 3: Questions)
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Interesting story so far. Keep it going.
(posted from chapter 4: Testing the Taste)
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Great story so far!! I wish I was Andrew!!
(posted from chapter 5: A New Day)
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I like it. i almost came in my shirts!!!
(posted from Chapter 6: Finding More Questions)
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I like how his body fluids can control both women and men!!!
(posted from chapter 7: Explanations and Plans)
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Nice twist,keep it going!!!
(posted from chapter 9: Complications)
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There were a few miss spelled words or other work in place of the correct ones. If you can clean them up, it would make raging the story easier.
(posted from chapter 11: Acceptance)
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Nice very nice
(posted from chapter 12: Master)
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Very weird turn of events.
(posted from chapter 13: Discoveries)
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That was weirder, but I like it. Does he ever find out what made him like that?
(posted from chapter 14: Turning Point)
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I did not like that one! Having sex with a pre-teen girl is sick!!!
(posted from chapter 15: Lust)
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DaveGrous wrote:
I did not like that one! Having sex with a pre-teen girl is sick!!!
Below is the list of codes used to describe this story. Please note the emphasized item:
Code(s) Used: coer, inc, mc, pedo, rape, reluc, rom, teen, viol, young
Now please note the quote below, from the site's Critiquing Guide, which is available in two different places on the site's main menu:
Critiquing Guide wrote:
Do not even comment on a story if you didn't like it. If you are of such a mindset that the story didn't even make you want to continue it, your criticism will never come out constructively. Just move on.
In short, if you had a problem with the sex scene you referenced, it was your own damned fault, and you shouldn't be taking the author to task for it. You should have, as the critiquing guide says, shut up and moved on.
Eric Storm
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That shouldn't be the end.what about the being that started this?
(posted from chapter 16: Conclusions)
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DaveGrous wrote:
That shouldn't be the end.what about the being that started this?
(posted from chapter 16: Conclusions)
This is not the end. It is not conclusions as in things are done, but as in come to conclusions. i.e. knowledge is gained and opinions are made.
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I am thoroughly excited to see this continue. I picked this up years ago and keep going back to reread it whenever a new chapter has been released. I'm ITCHING for a new chapter! Please!
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DoomCock wrote:
I am thoroughly excited to see this continue. I picked this up years ago and keep going back to reread it whenever a new chapter has been released. I'm ITCHING for a new chapter! Please!
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I' do intend to add more to this, unfortunately I have hit a bad wall of writers block, which happens to me all to often these days.
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Hope the writer's block passes, I would really like to see more of this story. Really good so far!
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Wonderful to see a new chapter added to this, albeit one that seems to raise more questions than it answers. Excellent story thus far James Marcus.
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Sdragon wrote:
agreed and i apologize, what i am referring to is how the chem teacher is not wearing any underwear but after all the sex she has her underwear on her. i might have read it wrong which would be just like me to do.
Just bringing this up again, because it hasn't been fixed. In Chapter 6 Mrs. Crabtree says "I took my Bra off just before you got here, my panties too." She never puts them back on, but in Chapter 7 you say "...her white bra pushed up exposing her ample breasts."
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Daddy_Lenin wrote:
Sdragon wrote:
agreed and i apologize, what i am referring to is how the chem teacher is not wearing any underwear but after all the sex she has her underwear on her. i might have read it wrong which would be just like me to do.
Just bringing this up again, because it hasn't been fixed. In Chapter 6 Mrs. Crabtree says "I took my Bra off just before you got here, my panties too." She never puts them back on, but in Chapter 7 you say "...her white bra pushed up exposing her ample breasts."
The continuity error should be fixed now.
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DaveGrous wrote:
I did not like that one! Having sex with a pre-teen girl is sick!!!
(posted from chapter 15: Lust)
Sir, sorry I missed your response to Chapter 15, unfortunately this story will contain a lot more sex with pre-teen girls, some of whom may be younger than Grace. If you do not like this, then unfortunately this story or any other story I write, will not be for you, as most of my readers have expressed a desire for them to go in that direction. What I can assure you will never be in my stories are, Necro, Snuff, Water Sports, Beastiality, Scat, Guro, Male on Male, Fem-Dom. Pretty much anything thing else can and probably will happen, if requested by my readers.
Thank you for reading my story so far and your feedback.
James
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Crusader wrote:
Interesting, very interesting. I look forward to reading more.
because you are directly asking for feedback on the age of the girls, I personally prefer the women in stories to have secondary sexual characteristics.
This may be the most obtuse way i have ever said "old enough to have tits please"
Anyhow im off to read the latest chapter.
Edit: typo
Last edited by Crusader (2018-08-07 11:51:47)
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Crusader wrote:
Crusader wrote:
Interesting, very interesting. I look forward to reading more.
because you are directly asking for feedback on the age of the girls, I personally prefer the women in stories to have secondary sexual characteristics.This may be the most obtuse way i have ever said "old enough to have tits please"
Anyhow im off to read the latest chapter.
Edit: typo
Don't worry there will be plenty of teens and adult women in the story as well.
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Hope you overcome the blockage as I am sure it has to be frustrating for you as much as us readers.
Thank you for sharing your work as I am getting alot of enjoyment from it.
(posted from the Item Information Page)
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