Eric Storm
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I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Hopefully you will continue to do so.
Eric Storm
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Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page
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Zmaybe
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sweet chapter. I saw some of the openings you left us to ponder. Will the gangsters make an appearance sooner , rather then later. The gangster chick sounds like she would be a good hookup for Tyler, start with defense training until they get closer... then the gangster family might get a tad racist, the "Don's princess" hanging around a black guy. could bring a fun twist as to how they work thru those issues. Anyhow, just a thought this chapter brought to mind. Damn, I love your writing, always makes my mind try to figure out what's coming up later.
(posted from Chapter 9: Bree)
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Stretchlace
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Chapter 9 was very interesting and enjoyable to read. Ethan keeps on finding new ladies (young and not so young). His opportunities seem endless and are fun to read about. I gave up trying to anticipate the plot turns. Your creativity is much better than mine. Thanks again for sharing that creativity with us.
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JustLucky
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Just keeps getting better and better :-)
(posted from Chapter 10: Izzy)
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darthel0101
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I apologize for not "verbalizing" how much I enjoy every chapter that you release; you are a truly superior storyteller.
(posted from Chapter 11: (Eye) Candy and Flowers)
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JustLucky
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Awesome indepth and with great sub plots :-)
(posted from Chapter 11: (Eye) Candy and Flowers)
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sadimlonely
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Eric Storm wrote:I'm not squandering that by letting you read it early.
:-P
Eric Storm
Waaaah! I wanna read it early!
:-)
Enjoying this, quite a lot.
See you in October :-)
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JustLucky
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Best Chapter yet :-)
Really getting some meat on the bones of the story!
10/10
(posted from Chapter 13: Harem Growth 2)
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tolil
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Member since 2023-Mar-13
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Very good story hope for more very soon.
(posted from Chapter 14: Evie)
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JustLucky
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Interesting chapter, cant wait to see where this goes :-)
(posted from Chapter 14: Evie)
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darthel0101
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interesting kink
(posted from Chapter 14: Evie)
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JustLucky
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well THAT was intense :-)
(posted from Chapter 15: Ethan)
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darthel0101
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one word - - - ouch
(posted from Chapter 15: Ethan)
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Wicked420
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Another awesome chapter! Please try to not leave us hanging for so long for your next installment.
(posted from Chapter 9: Bree)
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Eric Storm
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Wicked420 wrote:Please try to not leave us hanging for so long for your next installment.
There was a 1-month gap between the previous and current chapter releases. There has always been a one-month gap between chapter releases. Until I run out of "stored up" chapters, there will continue to be a one-month pause between chapter releases.
For the record, I'm working on Chapter 21 at the moment, so you're catching up to where I am very quickly already. You want me to make the wait even worse? I can post everything up to Chapter 20 now... and then you can wait SIX months between chapter releases...
Eric Storm
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Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page
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sadimlonely
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Good to see Ethan and co back after a bit of a hiatus.
And I still reckon that Rory is a perfect foil for Ethan - all his other wives and girlfriends are much too likely to just 'roll over' and let him have his way ...
(posted from Chapter 16: The Prive of Vengeance)
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Stretchlace
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Very interesting way you got our "hero" out of going to jail. The new job is also interesting especially from all the "opportunities" it will provide. It will be interesting to see if Ethan can continue his college classes and other things like the personal trainer job and helping out at the flower shop, etc, etc. Didn't see any of this coming. VERY entertaining/interesting.
I understand the release schedule. Just know, that I really look forward to the first of the month and appreciate all your hard work.
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JustLucky
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Well that took an interesting turn :-)
Love it!
(posted from Chapter 16: The Price of Vengeance)
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donkeyside6543
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Member since 2024-Mar-13
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Eric I have been following this story ever since I found the Mystic Wolf Pub and I just want to tell you have really enjoyed all you works. Thank you so much for putting this website together and maintaining it.
Don
(posted from Chapter 17: So This Is Mob Life)
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JustLucky
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Damn this is getting spicy :-)
(posted from Chapter 18: Settling In)
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mikkelsonr
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Member since 2017-May-8
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Thanks for NOT ending the chapter at the cliff hanger of Ethan's Sunday afternoon appointment arriving at the door...
(posted from Chapter 18: Settling In)
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Eric Storm
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Dammit... gotta go back and do an edit... :evil:
Eric Storm
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Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page
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Wicked420
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Absolutely beautiful story! Please keep writing.
(posted from Chapter 13: Harem Growth 2)
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JustLucky
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Man that was a helluva chapter :-)
Well worth the wait !
(posted from Chapter 19: Establishing a Reputation)
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mikkelsonr
Tipsy
Member since 2017-May-8
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Thanks for showing us that Ethan is still a good person...
(posted from the Item Information Page)
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