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Yes, it really does control our lives. Most of the time.
A mind-control story with a twist. Or two.
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About Dick Jones
This story started with a simple idea: women often joke that a man seems to think with his dick. Mind-control stories often bear this out, but under the guise of the man's mind being in control of everything. What if the source of control was... lower?
I wrote this in the Spring of 2004. I remember it pouring out very quickly (for me anyway -- a few days over a few weeks), and demanding far fewer blows to the head with the writer's block than usual. I know it's badly flawed, but there's an energy to it that I've since struggled to channel. I hope you like it.
For continuity freaks, this story is an oblique part of the Sapphire universe, but please don't hold that against it. Dick Jones stands on its own just fine, probably better.
A NOTE ABOUT SPOILERS: Not that this story contains great revelations, but if you have comments or questions that would constitute spoilers, please avoid putting them in this topic. Feel free to create a new topic with the word "spoilers" in the title (and without any actual spoilers in the topic title).
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Last edited by Imagineer (2006-12-07 19:37:28)
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And as per your request this is stickied.
Siath
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hey I just wanted to say, I really liked the story Funny funny and funny....I LMAO the whole time....I liked the rambling...It reminded me of ....ME
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I'm not sure if this is supposed to be a horror story or not but I'm not sure I find being able to have sex with any girl you want at any time is any form of horror or not unless you are married to an extremely jealous woman like I am. Great story.
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Definitely a Hilarious story, I'd love to see more of it but I guess you have it where it could end. I've read enough books over the years that used similar ending strategies.
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Nice - good fun story
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Liked the story. Thought the dialogue was plucky and entertaining. Thought that sence this was a short story and not a series that end left to much untold and was more of a cliffhanger. ....
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