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#276 2011-07-02 21:29:45

Boon
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

YEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAHH... is all i can say.

(posted from Chapter 8: Nathan 2)

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#277 2011-07-03 01:35:57

Eric Storm
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Okay... um... I'm glad you liked it? 

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#278 2011-08-17 14:27:44

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

I don't do much in way of feedbacks. But I had to say that I enjoyed reading Camp: Ron's Journey. Also I am loven this sequel Camp, Sibling Rivalry.

You have become one of my favorite writers, keep up with the good work and I can not wait to read the next chapter when you post it. :-)

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#279 2011-08-17 19:48:27

Eric Storm
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

I'm glad you are enjoying CSR.  I hope you'll take some time to read my other works while you're waiting for more of this one to be written.

Thanks for the feedback,
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#280 2011-08-21 23:39:45

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

A great read. I have said it before and will say it again. You should be publishing this work. Hope the next chapter comes soon. Ran out of things to read.

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#281 2011-08-27 23:38:21

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Hey just checking in to see if you have any projection on when the next installment will be released? Keep up the good work.

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#282 2011-08-28 09:52:53

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Eventually.*

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#283 2011-08-28 18:00:39

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*dies laughing*

...permission granted.


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#284 2011-08-28 22:30:09

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Fair enough figured as much of a response but no harm asking. Obviously your style of writing works for you as I've read a few of your stories and they are all good but do you have to go back and reread where you've left off to get the flow for your next chapter? Maybe its just my way of thinking but I would think it'd be hard to start and stop for such long periods of time. But then again I'm not a writer and everyone has their process. Just curious.

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#285 2011-08-29 03:21:38

Eric Storm
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I re-read my stories regularly, just for entertainment.  (The very reason I started writing was so that I had something good to read...)  Yes, if I have been away from a story for a while, I will re-read the previous few chapters (at least) to pick the story back up in my head.

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#286 2011-09-07 07:42:02

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lol, good process.... i re-read your stories ALOT 3dbig_smile    never seem to be able to get enuf... and i always enjoy them.

hope all is well eric and as always, great work 3dsmile

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#287 2011-09-07 19:44:34

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Glad you're enjoying the story.

All is as well as it ever gets anymore, thanks for asking.

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#288 2011-10-19 23:25:42

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Another good chapter. Like where this is heading. Thanks.

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#289 2011-10-21 03:42:04

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

HOLY SHITWAFFLE! The plot just got as thick as molasses mixed with concrete mixed in January in Antarctica.

(posted from Chapter 9: Greg 2)

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#290 2011-11-14 19:15:26

Umbra
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

wonderful story. thank you

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#291 2011-11-14 20:07:16

Eric Storm
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Glad you're enjoying it.  Thanks for the feedback.

Eric Storm


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#292 2011-11-15 13:47:10

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Comora wrote:

HOLY SHITWAFFLE! The plot just got as thick as molasses mixed with concrete mixed in January in Antarctica.

(posted from Chapter 9: Greg 2)

I couldn't have said it better than that, in fact that made me laugh.

and I agree, another great chapter Eric....loving it all, even though I have to re-read a few lines from the previous chapter to remember what's going on between updates 3dtongue lol

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#293 2011-11-15 20:48:46

Eric Storm
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Sorry.  I'm trying to write faster, but Real Life (TM) is being a bitch, as usual.

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#294 2011-11-18 23:42:04

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

omg fangasm 3dsmile

(posted from Chapter 11)


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#295 2011-11-20 08:27:28

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

I have enjoyed reading Camp Ron's journey, now I am stuck at chapter 8 of sibling's rivalry. I am anxious to read the rest of the story, will he beat his brother, or will he find his father first?
Keep on writing these kind of stories, the ones you start reading and cannot stop till you're at the end.

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#296 2011-11-20 23:57:23

Drowsy
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Sigh, the stories that road atlas could tell us. just one thing though. Where were Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland not touched in the war or are you mistaking Britan for England? =P

(posted from Chapter 11)

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#297 2011-11-21 00:40:28

Eric Storm
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

If you haven't managed to fix up England yet, why, exactly, would you go trying to take on three other countries?

I'm well aware of the difference between England, Great Britain, and The United Kingdom.

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#298 2011-11-24 17:06:53

Tiennek
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

I just started reading this and I'm really intrigued by how it starts out in the first few chapters, with the way the first Camp story ended I was afraid this was going to be another sequel that didn't engage me as a reader. Keep up the good work 3dsmile

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#299 2011-11-24 20:45:21

Eric Storm
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

What do you mean by, "...with the way the first Camp[sic] story ended..."?

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#300 2011-11-24 23:39:21

Tiennek
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Seemed pretty final to me and now having read the rest of what you have posted in Sibling Rivarly I see why it works. You've made the new story center on new characters instead of any of the old, which works better I think for the progression.

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