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A Fair Price
What is a fair price for the thing you want most? The Martin family will have a chance to find out.
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not bad i like it
(posted from Our Son the Freak)
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This sounds very interesting. I hope you continue it too, I'm interested to see what happens next. It's almost got a TKL kind of feel about it, and that's a good thing.
Oh, and what universe is this a part of? I didn't know what other stories might be in the same universe, if that was important or not...
(posted from Our Son the Freak)
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Thank you, Nightsecho.
Thank you, Black Rose.
Yes, I'm terrible about remembering some sorts of details, like making a story if it fits with a certain story group. Things That Go Bump and Lethal Mixture are part of the Magus Universe as well. It is my plan to eventually make the connections between them clear.
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I'm impressed you managed to get this second chapter out so quick! I suspect you've been holding out on us for a while, you sneaky person you. I'm glad Simon was able to escape his predicament. Oh, and one tiny quibble... I think the name of the group is the Bee Gees (two words and not with a j). And if you wanted to be *really* pedantic, the name of the song is "Stayin' Alive" (Because songs are frequently grammatically incorrect to make us all nuts). :-)
Anyway, good work as always and I'm glad you're getting some writing done!
(posted from Payback)
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great 2nd chapter
(posted from Payback)
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looks like a good story. Can't wait to see what happens with Simon at school and with the obligatory jock-fights-Simon-but-Simon-kicks-his-ass scene. Also can't wait to see what other powers he has/will get.
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another great chapter
(posted from Rage and Lust)
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I like it so far. I hope to see more.
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this is going great so far
(posted from Rage and Lust)
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YAY!!!! more please. Very well written and easy to empathize characters make this an instant favorite for me
(posted from Rage and Lust)
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This story is filled to the brim with potential. I eagerly await the next chapter. Adults are stupid.
(posted from Rage and Lust)
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Nice story so far..can't wait to read more..
(posted from Rage and Lust)
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