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Once again you've blown me away. I love the revenges and that you didn't draw out David getting to Woodward. Now we can really focus on his studies and meeting his new friends and enemies that he will meet. I can't wait.
(posted from Chapter 2: July)
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Glad you liked it. I hope it continues to entertain.
Eric Storm
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Sorry to be late on this chapter, guys. It should have gone out on the 1st. I forgot.
Eric Storm
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YES! I've been waiting for another one. I want to see this story hit it's stride.
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awesome
(posted from Chapter 3: August)
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An outstanding chapter. I love Jalla and seeing the school for the first time. All of the magical creatures are really cool and I can't wait to see the classes. Also the HP dig was great and made me laugh. Keep up the good work.
(posted from Chapter 3: August)
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Glad you're all enjoying the story. I hope I can continue to entertain.
Eric Storm
PS: It wasn't a "dig" at HP. I actually like Harry Potter up to the last two books.
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I really enjoyed this chapter, well worth the wait.
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Posted after Chapter 3:
Very nicely done Eric.
I'm not much for vampire, zombie and undead genres, so I approached this story with that thought. But after reading the first chapters I'm glad that I read this. This story is well crafted filled with detailing that builds a universe with character we care about and hinting at plots that lead to interesting destinations
Thanx for sharing your vision
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I'm glad you're liking it, WarLord. Thanks for the feedback. I promise that this is not about to turn into The Night of the Living Dead.
Eric Storm
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can't wait to read more. and i know your probably going to answer this at soem point but um. can demighosts have children?
(posted from Chapter 3: August)
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Well, let's consider that. An immortal creature... capable of having children.
There would be a LOOOOOT of demighosts in the universe.
No. The undead don't have children.
Eric Storm
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Once again a great chapter. I love the rules of your magic and demighosts. I can't wait to see him snap, which I think will probably be soon.
(posted from Chapter 4: September)
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Working out the rules is one of the things that took forever before I started writing this... and truthfully, I'm still running into things I didn't anticipate ahead of time.
Being consistent with a story like this can be a real bitch.
Thanks for the feedback,
Eric Storm
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Wonderful! Thank you Eric.
(posted from Chapter 4: September)
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Glad you liked it.
Eric Storm
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Really enjoying this story. Keep it comin.
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Ch. 4 is great; muchly looking forward to Ch. 5.
The one thing I never liked about the HP books was that Harry always put up with Draco's nonsense and bullying -- well, I hope David won't be so longsuffering WRT Marcus.
Also, I have a question: It looks like you're setting-up Penny as a love interest. Is ghost-demighost sex possible?
(posted from Chapter 4: September)
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Trust me, Marcus will be getting his before book seven.
As to G/DG sex... is there some reason it wouldn't be? He HAS a ghost form, after all. Whether he would use this ability on Penny or not, I can't say.
Glad you're liking the story. Thanks for the feedback.
Eric Storm
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Well, I must say I'm totally impressed. I liked the Author's note and here I was expecting harry potter after reading it JK. Anyway. I really loved the first chapter it was quite Amazing. Intriguing background. I cant wait to read more of it!
(posted from Chapter 1: June)
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Please Sir may we please have some more, of this awesome story. I eagerly await the next installment. Thank you for all the work you put into this site and your stories.
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D'OH!
(See, this is why I say "approximately" on all of my releases. I forgot to post it yesterday.) It will be up by the end of the day. I have to do a final read-through to make sure I didn't miss anything.
Eric Storm
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I have to say the shout-out was nice. I was like woo! I recognize that! Now I'm wondering what Marcus was up to that night... and I have to wait another MONTH to find out! Curse you and your interesting plotline! !
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Just out of curiosity... which reference is it you recognized?
Eric
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Great chapter. I do like the night of haunting and his revenges. I do think though that he had a better revenge for Marcus over just beating him up. Maybe I am wrong but he seems too smart for such a simple revenge.
(posted from Chapter 5: October)
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