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Fateless, The
Adam had an unlucky life, every thing that could go wrong did. One day the fates decided to correct that oversight.
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Awesome start. Thank you so much for this story. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Thank you for your feedback, I am actually quite proud of this story. It came to me in dreams little by little each night as I wrote it.
Last edited by telgar (2010-10-16 13:24:33)
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good start i like it
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oooh, very good, will there be more?
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Thank you for your comments Nightsecho and Lucky869. Yes there will be more, I am working on chapter two right now, I just finished Chapter three of My other story and have now started on chapter two of this one
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sweetness! *rubs nipples in anticipation*
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Cool start to the story and an interesting twist at the end. I look forward to finding out what happens next
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Storymaster69 wrote:
Cool start to the story and an interesting twist at the end. I look forward to finding out what happens next
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Chapter two is compleated and just waiting for the editor to go over it.
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Very nice, another very good beginning to a story, I am looking forward to more.
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awesome new chapter
(posted from Chapter 2: New Life)
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I read the new chapter and enjoyed it greatly. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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gah, can't wait for more, just keeps getting better and better
(posted from Chapter 2: New Life)
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Thank you, I am glad you are enjoying reading it as much as I am enjoying writeing it.
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i like this alot so far cant wait for more
(posted from Chapter 2: New Life)
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Lucky869 wrote:
sweetness! *rubs nipples in anticipation*
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creepy lol
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god this story just keeps getting more and more interesting, really love reading your stories and as always, eagerly awaiting more submissions
(posted from Chapter 3: Lust)
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Thank You I strive to keep you all intertained with plot twists and hard core sex
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great story, I can't wait to see what happens next
(posted from Chapter 3: Lust)
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Great chapter. I love the fact that Adam isn't just automatically being a jerk or overwhelmed by the power he has been given. I would like in the future to see a Fateless who does let the power go to his head. I can't wait for more man.
(posted from Chapter 4: Discovery)
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Thank you for your coments and I am glad you are enjoying it. The fates go through a long process to ensure that the powers of a fateless are given to people who will not go crazy with the power. But you never know it may happen.
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Another good chapter, I am still looking forward to each new chapter as they come out.
(posted from Chapter 4: Discovery)
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great chapter, definitely eager for more
(posted from Chapter 5: Choices)
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