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#1 2026-11-07 06:57:16
Appliance Audience
Appliance Audience
A classic romantic scene is told from a very strange viewpoint.
A couple in love have sex in the kitchen, while the microwave oven, toaster, blender, and other appliances watch and comment.
This is a highly experimental story. I have little idea whether it's a great leap of creativity or a disaster. Please let me know.
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