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#1 2022-04-03 14:32:39
Violation of Privacy
Violation of Privacy
I must have looked like a Chihuahua being mounted by a Great Dane. That should have scared me, I should have cared, done something about it, but I didn’t. It was too late. The time to prevent what happened had passed, and I didn’t care.
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#2 2022-04-04 00:50:06
- Pleidius
- Inebriated
- From: Minnesota
- Registered: 2021-06-09
- Posts: 55
Re: Violation of Privacy
Not the kind of thing I usually read, but
HOLY SHIT!
visceral,
gut punching imagery,
and
HOLY SHIT!
Now I want to know what happens next
If you're prepared to face the consequences, go ahead . . .
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#3 2022-04-05 03:23:10
- bistander
- Wasted
- Registered: 2015-09-03
- Posts: 241
Re: Violation of Privacy
Pleidius wrote:
Not the kind of thing I usually read, but
HOLY SHIT!
visceral,
gut punching imagery,
and
HOLY SHIT!
Now I want to know what happens next
It's not the kind of stuff I normally write, either. I'm glad you liked it.
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#4 2022-04-07 19:18:18
- mydarkside
- Inebriated
- Registered: 2021-01-26
- Posts: 28
Re: Violation of Privacy
WOW. OMG!
That was torrid, slightly disturbing but erotic. As always a twist or at least a hook to the next chapter. I hadn't expected that relationship in the story.
(posted from Chapter 1)
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#5 2022-04-08 14:48:56
- bistander
- Wasted
- Registered: 2015-09-03
- Posts: 241
Re: Violation of Privacy
mydarkside wrote:
WOW. OMG!
That was torrid, slightly disturbing but erotic. As always a twist or at least a hook to the next chapter. I hadn't expected that relationship in the story.
(posted from Chapter 1)
You would, hehe
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#6 2023-02-12 17:10:07
- bistander
- Wasted
- Registered: 2015-09-03
- Posts: 241
Re: Violation of Privacy
This is just a repost of the original story with some small changes to it.
(posted from Chapter 1)
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#7 2023-08-05 12:02:29
- Harddreams
- Inebriated
- Registered: 2023-07-24
- Posts: 24
Re: Violation of Privacy
The only thing that surprised me about this story is that it wasn't one of the priests. Painfully difficult to read surprisingly arousing even though I'm a heterosexual male.
Your writing is somehow very graphic without seeming obscene.
(posted from Chapter 1)
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