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Experiment 47
Unplanned drug interaction generates mind control
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I pulled back the second and third chapters of Experiment 47. While editing before posting I was finding too many plot holes and errors in continuity. Hopefully, I'll get it all fixed and reposted eventually.
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Getting continuity errors fixed.
Re-edited chapters up and more to cum
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Enjoying this, reminding me a bit of 'the book' and 'hierarchy of needs'
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Thank you for the comment
I've been trying to work with the 'with great power comes great responsibility' idea
and trying to show the protagonist's growth as he deals with the growing complexity of his life
and trying not to write myself into a corner . . .
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Good read
(posted from Chapter One)
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Absolutely loved this could not put it down
(posted from Chapter Nineteen)
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thank you
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Oh please continue this enticing story. I love the imagination you put into all your writings.
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Still awaiting the continuation or finish to this great story.....
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Hope this story gets completed but it has been a while. One thing though, it is College not Collage. First one an institute of higher learning, the other a form of art. I liked the characters and premise. It just can't end here.
(posted from Chapter Nineteen)
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