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Please continue, at least until the babies are born.
Then a book 3 when Dan leaves military service and they all relocate to the island.

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Continue. However perhaps further development of the Admiral's character with his quick retirement and move to the Island in order to oversee the development of it's infrastructure.

Threats and action toward Dan and Sue also demanding the growth of their intelligence and protection business. Especially as the Island develops.

Thanks for the story, It's been enjoyable. However a Book 3 may be needed.

(posted from Chapter 16 (An Island Christmas))

Cañ not wait to read the next chapter.

(posted from Chapter 22 (The Weekend))

I thoroughly enjoyed the first book.  I've been holding off reading this one until it is complete, but I don't think I'm going to last... I'm getting a little too eager to see what comes next

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What a great read. I am really enjoying the descriptions and depth of your storytelling. In addition, I know NAS North Island (‘73-‘77).

(posted from Chapter 5 (Reunion))

CalifRef wrote:

Please clarify the pronunciation of Amore (A-More, or A-Mor-a?).

Also, I would recommend getting a trusted Proofreader to view your submission prior to submitting.

Still, a very talented and enjoyable read!

(posted from Chapter 6 (Gifts a Zoo day and a Holiday))

The way I envision it is a-more but since I don't speak Spanish if you do and envision it as A-more-A so be it.

I would use a proof reader if I could find one.

I'm glad you are enjoying it such as it is and hope you continue to do so for many more chapters.

Sincerely,
Snake_eatr1960

Continue please

(posted from Chapter 16 (An Island Christmas))

wow, I am a fan.  I understand your need to take a break, but I pray you'll come back rested and ready gor a few hundred more chapters...  or as many as you want.  Your writing is fun and yoyr descriptions give me visions in my mind of what your words describe.  Some writers tell a story and just move the plotvalong. You do that and more, not only moving the plot, but bringing the reader along as well.  Thank you for all your hard work writing this fabulous story and enjoy your life.

(posted from Chapter 27 (New life and the end of life in San Diego))

Thank you very much for your kind words Zmaybe they help to make me want to eventually write more of this tale.

Sincerely,
Snake_eater1960

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Thank you for your service Lacyann.  For people like yourself I have tried to make it as believable as I could and sincerely thank you for letting me know I was able to do so.

Sincerely,
Snake_eater1960

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Great Story. Thanks.

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