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#1 2023-01-23 01:00:17
Brother Learns to Love, A
A Brother Learns to Love
Just a short fictional story about a guy with a fucked up life and how it just gets better and better as he learns to love.
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#2 2023-01-23 11:53:00
- Glockman22
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Re: Brother Learns to Love, A
Great story really enjoyed it. I have one question did Jaqueline really get to Med School or did the agency make her disappear?
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#3 2023-01-23 16:07:15
- Snake_eater1960
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Re: Brother Learns to Love, A
Hello Glockman22. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. As for Jaqueline going to medical school... She may have been able to go but knowing how the agency treated the girls it is doubtful. Because she told Sam that she was leaving though I doubt the agency did anything bad to her unless she left without telling them then all bets are off. I guess it will just have to remain one of the mysteries of life. Unless when I'm done with the story about Dan & Sue and decide to write a different one from Jaquelines point of view.
Currently though I have no plans for something like that.
Now back to regularly scheduled programing.
Snake_eater1960
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#4 2023-01-30 01:34:21
- 2speed
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Re: Brother Learns to Love, A
Great story I knew it would be if anything like your other wonderful work.Even when I saw where it was heading you slammed dunked it!!! Thanks for such a good story.
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#5 2023-01-31 01:22:36
- Snake_eater1960
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Re: Brother Learns to Love, A
Thank you for such kind words 2speed they are deeply appreciated.
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#6 2023-02-02 20:06:59
- Mikenc67
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Re: Brother Learns to Love, A
Wonderful story. A happy ending too.
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#7 2023-07-14 00:48:43
- tolil
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Re: Brother Learns to Love, A
Very well done hope to see more stores from you
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#8 2023-08-06 19:43:17
- Harddreams
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Re: Brother Learns to Love, A
loved the story and your style,
but ,the first girl from the agency said she was earning $3000 a week to save up for collage . and then its suddenly $100 if she's lucky.
also high class agency's have no need to do what you suggested .
apart from theat i really enjoyed
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