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Just finished reading it. Great story, great concept. Any possibility of a sequel?

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i do think u could do a sequel for PAO casue he when he released the girls from the program they could the authoritys but i dont think it would be worth the effort cause theres nothing the authoritys could do to him cause of his abilitys the only person who could posably b a threat is gabby and he has her access code

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lol very true but what i was getting at was even if the cops did show up just a quck little flash of PAO and hes a model citizen

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Very enjoyable.  Kind of a wild ride at the end.

B

(posted from Chapter 14)

the program this story used are looks like an i-doser, just much more advance i think.. because i-doser only used sound waves and some graphic. 
anw best of luck rick!

(posted from Chapter 1)

any1 know what this joke means?

i really didnt get it @,@


"Zack said solemnly, "Abandon all hope, oh ye who enter here."

Gabrielle looked at him, and she couldn't help but giggle.

"Once more onto the beach! Uh, into the breach!" Zack said. Gabrielle laughed out loud."

(posted from Chapter 14)

Nice story Eric just re-read and wanted you to know that it was great with a very good plot.

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I have got to say - that picking a favorite "Eric Storm" story is hard to do.  I enjoy almost everything Eric has written.  However, If I had to pick a favorite - it would be "Program Alpha-Omega".

I really enjoy your talent and imagination.  Keep it up!

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I seem to remember reading this a long time ago, in a galaxy far far away. When I was much, much younger than I am now. Re-reading it gave me an appreciation for where we are now technology wise, as well as how much I loved reading mind control fiction which just works. Your writing has improved over the years that I have read it, but your original works still hold up against those new stories. I love you works, always have, always will. Mucho love to this story.

Does PDA mean Public Displays of Affection now haha. But yeah, it was interesting to remember this time period in my head though, like back when the internet was measured in much slower speeds, where the average person didn't have that great of a computer, ahh. those were the times. ^_^

Glad you enjoyed the story.  I always felt the ending was a little weak, but truthfully, I've never come up with one I'd have liked better, either, so I guess this one will do.



Eric Storm