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Take My Picture
A married woman, unknowingly frustrated by her life, has an encounter with her best friend's younger sister who has come home for a visit. The sister helps the woman see how the choices she made weren't her own.
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very nice little tale. well written with realistic, believable characters.
(posted from Chapter 1)
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Pleidius wrote:
very nice little tale. well written with realistic, believable characters.
(posted from Chapter 1)
Thank you much for saying so.
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Wow, oh Wow..
Man can you tell a story. This has all the panash that I expect from you Bistander. A plot that ebbs and flows, leading you to where you know it is going, but right at the end you still manage to throw in a twist. A true love story that had everything that type of story should have. Even the small amount of sex was perfectly crafted and used at the right time.
Truly superb.
Some of the descriptions lead me to someone whose images look like the two girls with the orange background, but I know you wrote this before then.
(posted from Chapter 1)
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Thank you for your kind words. So happy you enjoyed it.
"Some of the descriptions lead me to someone whose images look like the two girls with the orange background"
Whose images and where?
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bistander wrote:
Thank you for your kind words. So happy you enjoyed it.
"Some of the descriptions lead me to someone whose images look like the two girls with the orange background"
Whose images and where?
Sorry, that should have read Girl not two girls. Check out our mutual friend's avatar on the site where we met.
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Very beautifully written story
(posted from Chapter 1)
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Great story. Liked the interpersonal growth of the 2 girls.
(posted from Chapter 1)
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