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#1 2022-04-06 05:08:19
Finding Home
Finding Home
An alien sorcerer pursued by an assassin takes up residence in a boy's mind
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#2 2022-04-17 03:17:22
- Glockman22
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Re: Finding Home
The CH 2 that is posted is for a different story.
Last edited by Glockman22 (2022-04-17 03:17:59)
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#3 2022-04-17 03:53:45
- Pleidius
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Re: Finding Home
Thanks for the heads up.
I fixed it
enjoy
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#4 2022-04-17 08:01:54
- Glockman22
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Re: Finding Home
excellent chapter I look forward to more.
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#5 2022-04-17 14:04:58
- Pleidius
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Re: Finding Home
thank you
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#6 2022-06-20 12:24:24
- DoomCock
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Re: Finding Home
Your writing style is actually reminiscent of Ernest Hemingway; short, direct sentences, terse dialog, all with a quickly moving story. This is well-done so far, for sure. Can't wait for the next one.
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#7 2022-06-20 19:16:24
- Pleidius
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- From: Minnesota
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Re: Finding Home
Thank you.
Ernest Hemingway?
Damn it! now I need to buy bigger hats . . .
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#8 2025-04-19 00:33:59
- Jaxom
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- From: Peoria, Arizona
- Registered: 2023-12-13
- Posts: 3
Re: Finding Home
I see that the last activity was in June of 2022. Your story had 6 episodes at that time. Have there been any attempts to add more? I also really like the plot so far and want to see more.
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#9 2025-04-19 00:38:12
- Eric Storm
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Re: Finding Home
Just to let you know, Pleidius hasn't even been on-site since 2023, so it's unlikely you'll get an answer.
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