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#1 2020-10-29 05:36:23

Bridget
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Revenge Is Sweet

Revenge Is Sweet

Young man discovers that the woman he had planned to marry is cheating on him.


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#2 2021-05-12 16:07:32

Maverick7508
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Re: Revenge Is Sweet

All in all, I really enjoyed it. I have experienced infidelity, both seeing a parent cheat and having my partner cheat, so watching a revenge tale warms my black dead heart. And so many of the little details, like friends and family digging the hole for you, make it feel so much more accurate. I hope we can see the continuation and conclusion of the story, Jane and Naomi have alot of Karma coming.

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#3 2022-01-27 07:22:46

Rearaxle
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Re: Revenge Is Sweet

I can't help but wonder why this story has not been finished.
It was just getting juicy.  Great story line and I enjoyed the direction this was going.  Oh darn.

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