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Chapter 17 was a great addition, but far too short for my taste.
A request: definitely revisit the mindscape and have him fuck his "daughter" some more. That was hawt.
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this story is perfect chapter 17 is to short for my taste. maybe for the future his daugher can be made real and he can have his way with her in the real world
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Chapter 19 and 20 will be posted on Friday.
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When is the next part coming out
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When is the next part coming out
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I'm now working on the next Chapter for Toy Master, then a few other stories, A Perfect ten, has two chapters in editing. I also plan on working the next chapter in Fateless sometime soon. So it might be a while before I get back to Just a Taste.
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I have to say, there’s a few parts I had to skip over, over all the story was good, several misspellings, grammatical errors, I think even names got switched once.
However, aside from the really short chapters, the pedo sex, I managed to see a really good story. There’s a few things that make me think, “what in the hell?”. Which is fine cause it makes me think about the background, what’s happened up to this point, etc.
I personally feel that to much of the story was taken away from Aaron, they seemed like a good pair. If focused more on everybody and everything else. And the feelings for drew that had no bases was... well confusing to say the least. Over all well done. I look forward to more.
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Elessar wrote:
I have to say, there’s a few parts I had to skip over, over all the story was good, several misspellings, grammatical errors, I think even names got switched once.
However, aside from the really short chapters, the pedo sex, I managed to see a really good story. There’s a few things that make me think, “what in the hell? . Which is fine cause it makes me think about the background, what’s happened up to this point, etc.
I personally feel that to much of the story was taken away from Aaron, they seemed like a good pair. If focused more on everybody and everything else. And the feelings for drew that had no bases was... well confusing to say the least. Over all well done. I look forward to more.
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Aaron and Andrew will have more time together next chapter. There will also be a bit of exploration into the Drew issue as well.
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Aaron and Andrew will have more time together next chapter. There will also be a bit of exploration into the Drew issue as well.
Please don't think i'm insinuating anything gay between them. It was simply a thought about their friendship, brawn and brains working together. I look forward to the clarifications with Drew. Thank you.
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Elessar wrote:
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Aaron and Andrew will have more time together next chapter. There will also be a bit of exploration into the Drew issue as well.
Please don't think i'm insinuating anything gay between them. It was simply a thought about their friendship, brawn and brains working together. I look forward to the clarifications with Drew. Thank you.
No Insinuation taken, M/M is something I will never have in my stories, though there may be a few men magically transformed into women.
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James Marcus wrote:
No Insinuation taken, M/M is something I will never have in my stories, though there may be a few men magically transformed into women.
yes, but which male getting transformed would be the interesting part. would the "hero" become the "heroin", or will it be their best friend? the options are almost limitless for this twisted gender bender plot scheme.
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Sdragon wrote:
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No Insinuation taken, M/M is something I will never have in my stories, though there may be a few men magically transformed into women.
yes, but which male getting transformed would be the interesting part. would the "hero" become the "heroin", or will it be their best friend? the options are almost limitless for this twisted gender bender plot scheme.
Technically it doesn’t even have to be a male turned female. Could be visa versus.... female turned male? Something of an accident?
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Elessar, the original comment was about the (im)possibility of male-male sex in the story. Thus, turning a woman into a guy for the purposes of sex would not be something the author would be interested in. I'm pretty sure he was suggesting the idea of sex occurring after the guy had been turned into a woman, thus ending up with male-female sex (even if still a bit mentally squicky...).
Eric Storm
PS: the phrase is "vice versa" (Sorry, tried, but could not resist this correction...)
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Eric Storm wrote:
Elessar, the original comment was about the (im)possibility of male-male sex in the story. Thus, turning a woman into a guy for the purposes of sex would not be something the author would be interested in. I'm pretty sure he was suggesting the idea of sex occurring after the guy had been turned into a woman, thus ending up with male-female sex (even if still a bit mentally squicky...).
Eric Storm
PS: the phrase is "vice versa" (Sorry, tried, but could not resist this correction...)
Exactly, basically the guy and his lover are both transsexual, Male to female, but since the story takes place in the 80's when that was not as openly accepted, they are hiding as a gay couple. When they get affected by the Main Characters powers they are transformed into actual women. Everyone remembers that they were once male, but now they are female. and under the MC's control.
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when is the next chapter coming out
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Next chapter is with the editor, once I get it from him it will be released.
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looking forward to the next chapter this last chapter was realy short
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Chapter 22 is with the editor now. only 7-8 more chapters until book one is completed.
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when is the next chapter coming out
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I would like to point out (for the 4,612th time) that this question, especially when posed by itself, is exceedingly rude.
Eric Storm
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Okay started on Chapter 23 yesterday and finished part 1 of the four parts. This chapter is going to be the longest chapter I have written yet, it will contain at least two sex scenes and one hell of a twist ending. The first part is already 2,168 words. If I can keep myself motivated and writing a bit a day I should have the chapter finished and to the editor by the end of the week.
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Chapter 23 Is about half written, I hope to have it to the editor before the weekend is out.
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Chapter 23 is completed and sent to the editor. Should be posted by next Friday
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an interesting start
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Just checking in, it's been a couple months so was wondering if the story may have been forgotten or something? There wasn't a change on the status but that doesn't mean anything.
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He just posted the other day in his general comments that all his story are on hold for the time being
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