donkeyside6543 wrote:

You could have come up with a better solution than live animals.

Such as?  You apparently didn't manage to come up with one, since you didn't offer a suggestion...

Eric Storm

You will be pleased to know that all new planets are vegetarian, once Amy approved the plant-based bacon substitute.

New planets ensure that wasteful things like raising cattle is bad for the planet.

Don't worry. They'll still have their prime rib and shrimp. Somehow.

T

donkeyside6543 wrote:

So you have developed all this technology to travel into space and are taking pigs, cows, chickens and the like the support system for live animals would huge.  Cows create a huge amount of waste their digestive systems are not the best.  You could have come up with a better solution than live animals.

(posted from Chapter 105 - To Mars And Beyond)

I could have, and maybe will. It leaves me options.

They have developed perfect meatless bacon. They had to!

(My apologies for the delay. I've been in the hospital and missed this)

(posted from the Item Information Page)

Ok, Now I understand.  You like it when tears run down my face.  Meanie.  I have been a fan for so so long and I still am excited when I see you released another chapter.  I check just about everyday to see if there is a new chapter.  I doubt many people in my life would understand in my obsession with your writings, mainly due to the "underage" and "incest" portions of your stories.  But I love the fantasy of the words you write and the true meaning behind what you write.  At least the meaning to me. 
  My take on your meaning is along the lines of: life is short, love yourself and everyone around you.  Do what you can to make life better for everyone you meet, if only to give a smile and encourage them to live for the good moments and not dwell on the bad.  Dare to think outside the box as it were. Be creative and be generous with what you create.  The sex is important as it is the catalyst for those involved to be more then just part of the old stodgy way of thinking and living.  It opens up the world to love and superpowers.  Being different is not good or bad, it is how we as individuals should be, free to learn and experience life, at any age as long as we remember it is a choice of ours and never to force our choices on anyone else.  Oh, and importantly, be polite, please and thank you go a long way in all we do.  Thank you again for this tale of how to be a better person through love.

(posted from Chapter 222 - My Watch Woke Me Up)

I love your summary. Essentially the Golden Rule combined with trusting young men and women more than we do. I think a lot of what I write would work, particularly self-paced school and less of an obsession with abstinence.

They come out, usually, every two weeks, by Monday.

T

(posted from the Item Information Page)

Great as usual.  Thank you for sharing your imagination with us.  Can we get some Morgan and Sofia alone time in the future?  I love the energy you have them portray together, especially when it involves racing.

(posted from Chapter 242 - Vacation Weekends)

Thank you! I really do need to bring Sophia and Morgan back in more. Even Bob and Amy. I have too many threads

Glad you're enjoying it.

Zmaybe wrote:

Great as usual.  Thank you for sharing your imagination with us.  Can we get some Morgan and Sofia alone time in the future?  I love the energy you have them portray together, especially when it involves racing.

(posted from Chapter 242 - Vacation Weekends)

You appear to have uploaded chapter 257 ("Oh Bella") for a 2nd time.

Just to let you know, you've got an extra letter in the boat company name. It's Chris-Craft, not Christ-Craft: https://www.chriscraft.com/download-a-b … a02ed7a9c5

(posted from Chapter 1 - The Kids Arrive)

"Christ-craft:  Our boats never sink, they walk on water!" 

Eric Storm

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[Administrator Note]
The rules of this site prohibit political discussion outside of the Politics and Religion area (which I admit I closed several years ago.)

For the sake of the author, the gist of the original post, removing the foray into the political, was the following:

I was enjoying the story quite a bit, and it was very hot, but once you started becoming political, it destroyed my enjoyment of the story.

Please note that this policy is applied equally to both sides.  This is not an attempt to promote a viewpoint, it is an attempt to prevent the forum from devolving into an eternal flame war.

Loved Chapter 29 - The Cruise Returns especially the reference of a multi-Billionaire having breakfast at a regular old Denny's as I have a fondness for my local Denny's having sat in my booth every morning 7 days a week since 1999. I find your story interesting yet different in you spend more time describing in detail cars, boats, wineries and all things material way much more than intimate details of sex and sexual acts in a XXX novel. Other authors will describe in minute detail the color, feel, taste, look of pussy lips and how they are different from one female to another. And your story has been fascinating and very interesting seeing the development of characters and being a story allows them to be smarter, better/best at anything they do more so than even seasoned professionals. GREAT STORY and Great Story-Teller. Eagerly anticipating reading all the other chapters except the politics.

(posted from Chapter 29 - The Cruise Returns)

I am so glad you wrote this chapter is silly, ridiculous and fun which says so much about your overall story being more fantasy than fiction as it is so beyond what "normal real life could truly be BUT it is most entertaining as you are a wonderful writer with a highly taboo and erotic story background that I'm loving it more and more as each chapter keeps whizzing along. I still yell and scream at the screen on each foray into nonsense politics with an 11-year-old "kingmaker" but in your overall story it still adds flavor. Amy is the character I most enjoy as she is sexy as hell but is a Momma Bear you wouldn't want to tangle with as she loves to death all of her children but most especially the first three plus Chris due to tragic deaths of parents and the love that Amy has from her time as Nanny. I also really like Morgan and Leslie as they are vivacious smart and sexy. The Chris character is hard to take as even fantasy is ridiculous that an eleven-year-old is in charge of multi-billion-dollar charity and PAC; but it is your story and I can always choose to skip that paragraph or chapter if I want. I am appreciative that all the incest and underage sex is consensual and sought after by said underage children and that there are no mean, violent or sadistic measures written about unless accepted by each child. I am eagerly interested in reading the next 200+ chapters.

(posted from Chapter 40 - Our Own Damn Airport)

You keep talking about double ended dildos for the girls to use for ass fucking especially the guys but you need to upgrade to Strapless Strap On dildos that insert into the fucker (that also has vibrations for the fucker) and the business end for the fuckee's. That will spice up your stories. I pass that along from another epic incest, underage sex story, Daddy Remembers by Angels_Envy but maybe that type of dildo is what you speak of but not very clearly.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

You've got to be fucking kidding, their own country but it is funny as hell and a monarchy too boot. What an imagination to think up this story line. And now Bob and Amy can do ANYTHING with sex with ANYONE at ANYTIME of any age in the open. You can squeeze 100 chapters out of the new country concept and everything it will take to make it work. But with the previous 40 chapters and your bent to liberalism, it will be interesting to see the direction your story line takes.

(posted from Chapter 40 - Our Own Damn Airport)

Bob and family need to go deep sea fishing as they own Midnight Express boats plus a couple of 52 ft sport fishing boats. For all the interest in cars, I don't remember any sex in said cars especially the middle school and high school kids.

(posted from Chapter 41 - Pregnant!)

fishdeeper wrote:

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[Administrator Note]
The rules of this site prohibit political discussion outside of the Politics and Religion area (which I admit I closed several years ago.)

For the sake of the author, the gist of the original post, removing the foray into the political, was the following:

I was enjoying the story quite a bit, and it was very hot, but once you started becoming political, it destroyed my enjoyment of the story.

Please note that this policy is applied equally to both sides.  This is not an attempt to promote a viewpoint, it is an attempt to prevent the forum from devolving into an eternal flame war.

Not sure what to do about this. What defines political? Their own monarchy? Testifying in front of Congress? Chris as president? I am happy to skip chapters that are "political" but I need to understand. It may force me to remove the story -- it's a part of it.

I do want to ensure it is clear that I respect whatever rules you apply -- it's your site -- I just don't know what to do. An upcoming chapter is going to be a directional shift and foundationally it is about Chris growing and it is political.

Coaching welcome but I'm not going to change the story. I'll just remove any chapters that violate the rules. It will make it a little choppy to the reader.

fishdeeper wrote:

I am so glad you wrote this chapter is silly, ridiculous and fun which says so much about your overall story being more fantasy than fiction as it is so beyond what "normal real life could truly be BUT it is most entertaining as you are a wonderful writer with a highly taboo and erotic story background that I'm loving it more and more as each chapter keeps whizzing along. I still yell and scream at the screen on each foray into nonsense politics with an 11-year-old "kingmaker" but in your overall story it still adds flavor. Amy is the character I most enjoy as she is sexy as hell but is a Momma Bear you wouldn't want to tangle with as she loves to death all of her children but most especially the first three plus Chris due to tragic deaths of parents and the love that Amy has from her time as Nanny. I also really like Morgan and Leslie as they are vivacious smart and sexy. The Chris character is hard to take as even fantasy is ridiculous that an eleven-year-old is in charge of multi-billion-dollar charity and PAC; but it is your story and I can always choose to skip that paragraph or chapter if I want. I am appreciative that all the incest and underage sex is consensual and sought after by said underage children and that there are no mean, violent or sadistic measures written about unless accepted by each child. I am eagerly interested in reading the next 200+ chapters.

(posted from Chapter 40 - Our Own Damn Airport)

Really glad you're enjoying it. You're right at the cusp of a big change in direction. Although I have just been told that politics are taboo (which I find so fascinating) so I might have to just remove the story. It isn't the heart of the story but it IS part of the story -- it comes down to their moral code. I guess that's political, but they're the good guys.

So I am stuck.

fishdeeper wrote:

You keep talking about double ended dildos for the girls to use for ass fucking especially the guys but you need to upgrade to Strapless Strap On dildos that insert into the fucker (that also has vibrations for the fucker) and the business end for the fuckee's. That will spice up your stories. I pass that along from another epic incest, underage sex story, Daddy Remembers by Angels_Envy but maybe that type of dildo is what you speak of but not very clearly.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

Not sure where you are in the story, but trust me, double-ended dildos become foundational to the story

fishdeeper wrote:

You've got to be fucking kidding, their own country but it is funny as hell and a monarchy too boot. What an imagination to think up this story line. And now Bob and Amy can do ANYTHING with sex with ANYONE at ANYTIME of any age in the open. You can squeeze 100 chapters out of the new country concept and everything it will take to make it work. But with the previous 40 chapters and your bent to liberalism, it will be interesting to see the direction your story line takes.

(posted from Chapter 40 - Our Own Damn Airport)

I get your perception of liberalism but foundationally their political philosophy is the Golden Rule. Do unto others...

They're trying to do good for the world. I guess that's political these days. Feels a little sad.

fishdeeper wrote:

Bob and family need to go deep sea fishing as they own Midnight Express boats plus a couple of 52 ft sport fishing boats. For all the interest in cars, I don't remember any sex in said cars especially the middle school and high school kids.

(posted from Chapter 41 - Pregnant!)

That's a great idea. I struggle though because I have never BEEN deep sea fishing. It's why basketball is the only sport that is featured much. It's the only sport I know. I'll give it a shot. Just be patient. I'm done with chapters into 2027.

Sorry folks for getting a bit behind in posts. I try to respond to every one fairly quickly. Life is just a bit complicated right now, so slow.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

timbuch:

My comment concerning political postings was aimed at the person commenting, not at you.  Their original post was a political diatribe about how you had "ruined" the story.  Please note, I've not read your story, and it's been over a month since that post, so I cannot recount to you exactly what they were complaining about... nor would I post it here if I could, because that would be violating the "no politics" rule. 

The rule about politics is a forum rule, not a story rule.  It's intended to prevent arguments from starting.  There is no need for you to concern yourself with whether a story or chapter runs afoul of this rule or not, as it cannot do so.  Please feel free to post your story with whatever content you put into it.

Eric Storm

Eric Storm wrote:

timbuch:

My comment concerning political postings was aimed at the person commenting, not at you.  Their original post was a political diatribe about how you had "ruined" the story.  Please note, I've not read your story, and it's been over a month since that post, so I cannot recount to you exactly what they were complaining about... nor would I post it here if I could, because that would be violating the "no politics" rule. 

The rule about politics is a forum rule, not a story rule.  It's intended to prevent arguments from starting.  There is no need for you to concern yourself with whether a story or chapter runs afoul of this rule or not, as it cannot do so.  Please feel free to post your story with whatever content you put into it.

Eric Storm

Thanks Eric. I admit I got confused because it seemed contrary to the philosophy of the site. I love the rule for the forum though. Your space, your rules.

Whew.

T

I don't censor the stories.  But there is little reason to encourage fighting, and that's pretty much all discussions of religion/politics ever do these days.  Not to mention, I've been censoring readers since the beginning.  (This site has a very strong no-flaming-the-authors policy.)

If you are ever unclear about a rule, or whether or not you can post something (story or forum message), just ask.

Eric Storm