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2010-Oct-16 @ 12:33 PM | |
lordalpha Wasted Member since 2007-Jan-26 Posts: 139 |
Nadez, Read PAO first! You will love it! ----- |
2010-Nov-6 @ 4:32 PM | |
advancewar Wasted Member since 2007-Feb-6 Posts: 204 |
even 2 years later agree with ^^^ ----- life=books |
2010-Nov-6 @ 4:34 PM | |
advancewar Wasted Member since 2007-Feb-6 Posts: 204 |
wait a second......ooooops im a retard i just read the registered and thought it was post date /facepalm ----- life=books |
2011-Mar-31 @ 6:29 AM | |
SnakeEater Inebriated Member since 2009-Aug-29 Posts: 16 |
Thank you for a Very outstanding story! Once Zack got his feet under him & mind straightened out he did pretty well. A very eclectic & sometimes accidental choice of females but turned out to be a nice variety, variety is the spice after all.
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2011-Jul-13 @ 10:25 AM | |
Blackdraman Tipsy Member since 2011-Jul-1 Posts: 1 |
Just finished reading it. Great story, great concept. Any possibility of a sequel? ----- |
2011-Jul-13 @ 10:45 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5804 |
To do what? No, there's no plan at all for a sequel to this one. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2012-May-23 @ 3:34 AM | |
aces8998 Inebriated Member since 2011-Jun-12 Posts: 16 |
i do think u could do a sequel for PAO casue he when he released the girls from the program they could the authoritys but i dont think it would be worth the effort cause theres nothing the authoritys could do to him cause of his abilitys the only person who could posably b a threat is gabby and he has her access code ----- |
2012-May-23 @ 4:49 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5804 |
Now, don't you think, as paranoid as Zack was, that he would have protected himself from being ratted on? He may have "freed" them, but there's no need for him to be stupid about it... ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2012-May-25 @ 7:21 AM | |
aces8998 Inebriated Member since 2011-Jun-12 Posts: 16 |
lol very true but what i was getting at was even if the cops did show up just a quck little flash of PAO and hes a model citizen ----- |
2012-May-25 @ 8:42 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5804 |
Yeah, there's not going to be a PAO sequel. This is one of the stories that is going to stand by itself. I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to think it might be worth a sequel, though. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2015-Nov-13 @ 6:36 AM | |
Rescue25 Wasted Member since 2014-Jul-7 Posts: 122 |
Very enjoyable. Kind of a wild ride at the end.
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2015-Nov-13 @ 12:03 PM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5804 |
Glad you enjoyed it. I wish I could have made the ending more complicated, but I never could figure out how to do so. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2015-Nov-27 @ 9:48 PM | |
nyotie Tipsy Member since 2015-Nov-25 Posts: 4 |
the program this story used are looks like an i-doser, just much more advance i think.. because i-doser only used sound waves and some graphic.
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2015-Nov-28 @ 3:14 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5804 |
Except that, at their best, binaural beats can only produce a mood, or a specific brainwave pattern. (And this assumes you believe they work at all, in the first place.) ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2015-Dec-3 @ 8:58 PM | |
nyotie Tipsy Member since 2015-Nov-25 Posts: 4 |
any1 know what this joke means?
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2015-Dec-3 @ 10:23 PM | |
adultswim3 Inebriated Member since 2012-Sep-16 Posts: 58 |
I haven't read this in a while so don't remember the context but the first quote is from Dante's Inferno it's an inscription on the gate to hell. I'm guessing the second quote is a play on words from Shakespeare's Henry the fifth "Once more unto the breach." ----- |
2017-Mar-11 @ 10:49 PM | |
Neptune:lord of the sea Inebriated Member since 2015-May-9 Posts: 13 |
Nice story Eric just re-read and wanted you to know that it was great with a very good plot. ----- Every coin has two sides |
2017-Mar-12 @ 2:07 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5804 |
Glad you enjoyed it. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2017-Jul-26 @ 12:36 AM | |
Darkside_6 Inebriated Member since 2016-Aug-10 Posts: 10 |
I have got to say - that picking a favorite "Eric Storm" story is hard to do. I enjoy almost everything Eric has written. However, If I had to pick a favorite - it would be "Program Alpha-Omega".
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2017-Jul-26 @ 3:53 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5804 |
Thanks for the feedback. This story doesn't get much attention, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2017-Jul-29 @ 1:04 PM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 372 |
I seem to remember reading this a long time ago, in a galaxy far far away. When I was much, much younger than I am now. Re-reading it gave me an appreciation for where we are now technology wise, as well as how much I loved reading mind control fiction which just works. Your writing has improved over the years that I have read it, but your original works still hold up against those new stories. I love you works, always have, always will. Mucho love to this story. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2017-Jul-29 @ 11:42 PM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5804 |
What do you mean, technology has advanced? Just because you'd have to explain to today's teenagers what a "PDA" was? ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2017-Jul-30 @ 10:41 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 372 |
Does PDA mean Public Displays of Affection now haha. But yeah, it was interesting to remember this time period in my head though, like back when the internet was measured in much slower speeds, where the average person didn't have that great of a computer, ahh. those were the times. ^_^ ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2023-Jan-30 @ 10:07 PM | |
Dadrepus Wasted Member since 2023-Jan-12 Posts: 112 |
Very enjoyable read. I conclusion I can live with. ----- Always willing to help. May not be good at it ;-) |
2023-Jan-31 @ 6:48 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5804 |
Glad you enjoyed the story. I always felt the ending was a little weak, but truthfully, I've never come up with one I'd have liked better, either, so I guess this one will do. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |