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#1 2007-10-03 02:13:57

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Dead Men

Dead Men

have called this story vignette  “writing as therapy” since it resulted from spending too much time standing on green linoleum, staring at beige walls while I drink awful coffee.

The story is 'stream of conscious', the end result of pondering an increasingly war like China with its surplus of unmarried young men when I see a picture of The Cougar Ace

So be advised there is a darker tone to this narrative which set in the present with graphic violence, neither sexual nor gratuitous but will be ample.    There will be sexual situations but they will be peripheral to the central plot arc. 

Did I mention it would be violent? 

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#2 2007-10-05 00:15:06

crxbnt
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Re: Dead Men

Sure starts with a bang! Love to read more of this one.

(posted from Chapter Two)

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#3 2007-10-05 01:39:21

WarLord
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Re: Dead Men

crxbnt wrote:

Sure starts with a bang! Love to read more of this one.

(posted from Chapter Two)

Thanx

I'm pondering continuation right now

meanwhile back in Havre...


"A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus: 1. What am I trying to say? 2. What words will express it? 3. What image or idiom will make it clearer? 4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?" - George Orwell, Politics and the English Language, 1946

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#4 2017-03-15 15:35:00

ChiefRock
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Registered: 2010-11-29
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Re: Dead Men

You really need to continue writing. You have a definite talent

(posted from Chapter Two)


Rule number one ; The Chief is always right.
Rule number Two; The Chief is always right.

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