The Pub Discussion Board

if thats the way you want to write, *shrug* fine. I got the impression you were aiming for something different though, in which case i guess i just thought there would be more differences.

Now now... swear words aside (and who the hell uses swear words on a fucking erotica site??? )

Xhari expressed their opinion politely.  Whether we agree with it or not, we should at least do them the same courtesy of responding in kind.

Eric

When I am looking at the story arc of this story it seems that everything is going great for Martin so following logic something bad is going to happen after the prostitute and martin get it on. Someone (the bad guys) will be talked about or be broght into the story by kidnapping or killing someone. Any have any Ideas....???

Nope u cant say what you think unless u go under the 1st amendment of the U.S. constitution that states that congress will make no law... this means that people (not congress) can restrict your speech (ex. Millitary funerals, yelling fire in a movie theater) but i was not infringing on your right to express your opinion if you read what i wrote. Your critisisms are lacking. You give no supporting evidance and when you tried to in your first post you were vague about it. I believe that you could express your opinion but instead you insult the writer by telling him that their all the same without giving and examples and just vague ideas. I then told you to shut up because it was not a critism it was just an insult. Now one person might find a post by me in Jeffersons new title that kind of followed what i was so mad about with Xhari but i am planning to write a critic on that so dont call me a hypocrit just yet. But anyways Xhari you can continue your naive point of view on this topic I have no interest inpissing off the masses with a Forum war with you so i will end this argument with you right now.
               Sry for those that are mad

(posted from the Item Information Page)

You did it again! fantastic story. I hope that you will continue this story soon. I am and will always be a big fan. I recommend this story to all.

(posted from Chapter 14)

I really enjoyed reading this story!  Lots of plot twists as well as being very hot and erotic.

I have yet to read one of your stories that I haven't really enjoyed.  Now I'm waiting for updates to "Where the Maiasaurs Roam" 

(posted from Chapter 15)

One of the great things about your stories is that, well, you write stories... LOL! There are characters with personaliites, emotions, dilemmas, good times and so forth. Sex stories with only anatomical mechanics don't hold my interest.... The same way in real life: my friends and lovers all are reasonably complex people, with qualities and shortcomings but good and strong ethical values, intelligence and good humor.

Congratulations for making them almost real to me... I was able to read and see faces in my mind's eye!

Does it seem like usenet somehow missed chapters 10-12, or is it just me?

Eric Storm wrote:

All I can say is that I posted them.  I have no control over where they go after that.

Eric

I never doubted you.
And I'd be hard pressed to argue otherwise with the proof at hand.
http://groups.google.com/groups/search? … hl=en&
(all present and accounted for)

What caught my attention was that several servers seem to be missing one or more of the posts.
It's not unusual for a server to lose a post or two on the odd day, but several?
-something for the tinfoil-hat brigade to puzzler over.

Putting my mad ranting to the side here, I've about finished chapter four and although I don't usualy read from the "mind control"
selections, here's yet another from you that grabbed me right at the start.
Well done.

hey just a thought and i know you have a bunch of stories already in progress but i was thinking if you made a  secuiul(how do you spell that) to  this you could have his son who is the opposite of his personality (ie. enjoys the power.kinda like his girls brother)  could then have the storie go any number of ways including mabee he loses his powers   oo or haveing a crossover kinda thing from  Joe J. s twice lucky that would be kinda cool. well ttyl

You are the best could not stop reading it

(posted from Chapter 15)

Truly great story. My Girlfriend is just getting into erotica so i recommended this to her. She is three chapters in and thinks it is great. Once again thank you for all your work.