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#1 2022-11-09 09:44:09

Bridget
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Jenny and Uncle Jerry

Jenny and Uncle Jerry

Jenny's mother pushes her to entertain perverted Uncle Jerry in disturbing ways.


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#2 2022-12-04 16:03:43

Chuckhelius
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Re: Jenny and Uncle Jerry

Wow, a big happy ending.  Even though I didn't totally appreciate the smoking aspect, it did fit in the story line as an essential aspect. The story has a nice flow to it and not a wham bam, fuck and cum tripe. Easy to read and follow the story line.  thanks for the story.

(posted from Chapter 7)

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#3 2022-12-04 19:49:06

Eric Storm
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Re: Jenny and Uncle Jerry

Chuckhelius wrote:

...has a nice flow to it and not a wham bam, fuck and cum tripe.

Um... did you mean "trope"?  'Cause "tripe" is a disgusting food item...

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#4 2022-12-21 11:40:56

Limnophile
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Registered: 2022-07-04
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Re: Jenny and Uncle Jerry

Chuckhelius wrote:

Wow, a big happy ending.  Even though I didn't totally appreciate the smoking aspect, it did fit in the story line as an essential aspect. The story has a nice flow to it and not a wham bam, fuck and cum tripe. Easy to read and follow the story line.  thanks for the story.

(posted from Chapter 7)

I agree with Mr. Storm, tripe is barely fit to be dog food.

Some people are disgusted by analingus, lesbian sex, or smoking. To each their own. I happen to enjoy watching girls or women smoking because the sucking reminds me of blowjobs. I also love to watch lesbian or threesome pornos that include butt play or anal sex.

On the other hand, seeing married middle-aged couples doing missionary sex for the 5,000th time bores me to tears. I'd actually rather wash dishes or mow the yard.

Chapters 5 and 6 explain the need for dirty underwear, suckers, and cigarettes. Only the first 7 chapters have been posted, and I need to finish writing chapters 8 through 12 when I get around to it.

* * * SPOILERS BELOW * * *

The story eventually ends back at the beginning with Jenny very wealthy, in her late 30's, and about to screw some close relatives who are born in chapter 9.

Last edited by Limnophile (2022-12-21 12:03:45)

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#5 2022-12-21 19:52:20

Eric Storm
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Re: Jenny and Uncle Jerry

Just a tip, Limnophile:  The forum has a spoiler tag for hiding things like occur in your post.  The tag is [ spoiler ] (without the spaces) [ /spoiler ].

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