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#1 2022-08-02 22:34:07

Bridget
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Billie's Mom

Billie's Mom

A boy spies on his mother when she comes out of the shower and gets caught.


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#2 2022-08-03 14:53:05

Old Salt
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Registered: 2018-05-25
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Re: Billie's Mom

You are off to a good start with this short.  Please continue with more, maybe the beginning of a series for the pair.

(posted from Chapter 1)

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#3 2022-08-05 23:33:27

Mikenc67
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From: North Carolina, USA
Registered: 2022-05-26
Posts: 54

Re: Billie's Mom

Thanks. I'm just the editor/poster the real author/creator is a friend and I have asked him to write a follow-up chapter of what happens the next day and what happens with Billie's friend & his sister.

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#4 2022-08-13 06:11:59

Mikenc67
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Re: Billie's Mom

FYI: My friend is busy with another project so I will be starting on a Part 2 in the near future, and hope to post it by late November.

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#5 2022-08-21 19:18:57

Mikenc67
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Re: Billie's Mom

Found I have more time on my hands than originally thought.  Since part 1 contained chapters 1&2, I have posted Chapter 3 and then Chapter 4.  Hope you all enjoy the story.  If anyone has a special request for a plot line let me know and I'll try and incorporate into this story, or maybe start a new story line.

Thanks for reading, we are very pleased to have 111 downloads so far this month.

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#6 2022-09-05 18:55:47

Mikenc67
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Re: Billie's Mom

183 downloads this month 616 total.  THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR SUPPORT.
I am contemplating starting a new story, a spin-off of BILLY'S MOM.  Please watch this form for updates.

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#7 2022-09-14 19:10:51

Mikenc67
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From: North Carolina, USA
Registered: 2022-05-26
Posts: 54

Re: Billie's Mom

Just a note to let you folks know that I just uploaded the short story "Billy & Dave".  Hope you like it.  I am now starting another short story "The Guys & Girls", it's about the picnic thee boys have with the twin girls they just met.  After that story is finished it's back to Billy's Mom.
423 downloads so far this month, THANK YOU ALL.

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#8 2022-10-18 14:41:00

Mikenc67
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Registered: 2022-05-26
Posts: 54

Re: Billie's Mom

FYI: I broke up the first unit into two chapters 1 and 2, after I re-edited correcting for spelling and puncuation.

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