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#401 2026-02-20 13:08:17
- JustLucky
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- Registered: 2021-10-11
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Re: Agent of Change
Noice work, looking forward to the next installment :-)
(posted from Chapter 34)
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#402 2026-02-28 03:50:22
- Stretchlace
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- From: Rochester, NY
- Registered: 2021-03-27
- Posts: 10
Re: Agent of Change
Very interesting. Several different story elements all moved forward. Lots of moving parts with this story. One thought I had was Nick seemed to brush off the Alumitanium interest in Pterajet rather quickly. Possibly it could come back to haunt him later? That's just a thought I had. Nick is moving the company forward in many different directions all at once. In the "real world" that would be attracting attention from many different directions. Many possible plot developments. Looking forward to seeing where you take the plot line. Thank you for all your creative efforts.
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#403 2026-02-28 18:39:15
- Eric Storm
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- From: New Port Richey, FL
- Registered: 2006-09-12
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Re: Agent of Change
Stretchlace wrote:
Very interesting. Several different story elements all moved forward. Lots of moving parts with this story. One thought I had was Nick seemed to brush off the Alumitanium interest in Pterajet rather quickly. Possibly it could come back to haunt him later? That's just a thought I had. Nick is moving the company forward in many different directions all at once. In the "real world" that would be attracting attention from many different directions. Many possible plot developments. Looking forward to seeing where you take the plot line. Thank you for all your creative efforts.
Nick didn't "brush off" the info about Alumitanium. He didn't want to discuss it with an outsider. If he's going to get more information, he's going to get it from trusted sources, not unknown ones.
And yes, I realize that there really should be more businesses interested in SALT Corp... but I can only cover just so much in one story, so I have to reduce some things. The story is more about the people than the company, so...
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#404 2026-03-11 18:11:05
- dustbunny
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- Registered: 2013-07-01
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Re: Agent of Change
I love this story!
(posted from Chapter 34)
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#405 2026-04-15 12:04:21
- JustLucky
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Re: Agent of Change
Wow, loving the progression of the plot!
(posted from Chapter 35)
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#406 2026-04-15 21:22:09
- Zmaybe
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- From: Phoenix AZ
- Registered: 2021-06-27
- Posts: 86
Re: Agent of Change
thank you for sharing more of this fun story. Wish I was 16 again so I could enjoy the quick recovery...lolI am looking forward the the next chapters.
(posted from Chapter 35)
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#407 2026-04-16 19:29:48
- darthel0101
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- Registered: 2013-08-18
- Posts: 282
Re: Agent of Change
another superb chapter - - - well done
(posted from Chapter 35)
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