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#1 2016-04-13 22:00:02
Boy and his Genie, A
A Boy and his Genie
A mysterious package leads Matt Evans to magical fun, as well as a centuries-old conspiracy.
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#2 2016-04-15 19:44:20
- saurav_mystery1989
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Re: Boy and his Genie, A
Awesome plot. But it seems both Chapter 14 and 15 are same, did I miss something ?
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#3 2016-04-16 00:08:17
- witmoca
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Re: Boy and his Genie, A
Chapter 14 is missing, i believe. I seem to remember that 14 should be what i think is a great ending, with chapter 15 serving as a sort of extra 
. But you're missing a few things if you read chapter 15 without 14. Probably uploaded the wrong chapter 
.
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#4 2016-04-16 20:48:30
- drmetz13
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Re: Boy and his Genie, A
i liked this story very much, and enjoyed reading it. the last chapter was a little detracting with all the time travel though.
(posted from Chapter 15 - End)
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#5 2016-04-17 22:23:20
- DragoTime
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Re: Boy and his Genie, A
Fixed the story. Instead of Chapter 15 twice, Chapter 14 and 15 are there properly. Anyone who was confused, it's fixed now.
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#6 2016-07-22 01:48:35
- Lacy69
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Re: Boy and his Genie, A
Nice story line. Well written and very inventive on the Genie and the society that wanted to take them all.
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#7 2023-07-09 06:24:52
- Dadrepus
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Re: Boy and his Genie, A
Definitely a Fun Story with a good ending.Ready to read the related stories.
(posted from Chapter 15 - End)
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#8 2025-02-13 11:13:32
- Sqinty_Jones
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Re: Boy and his Genie, A
Wow!
While in the end there are no truly new stories... this one is really close to the origin...
Simply one wonderful Big Bang.
I truly enjoyed reading this. It reminisces of the old Classics of SF and Fantasy such as Alfred Bester, Varley, Early Clarke, etc.
Simply a nice read with an astoundingly straightforward storyline, not even loosing coherence in spite of all the unanswered sideline characters imbued with power they should never have possessed.
Sadly, one point hasn't been fully addressed, however it was touched: In the end, the greatest will do the worst by doing "good" because corruption is inherent and inevitable to possessing power.
Keep your style. I love it.
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