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On the eve of the winter solstice, a young woman begins to learn the truth about the family business.
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Just read the start to your story. It looks interesting and I am curious to see what happens next.
(posted from prelude)
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About Winter's Blade
This is a Christmas story conceived two years ago for the 2004 winter Story Egg. Christmas came and went, and I didn't want to write a short story that I'd have to keep to myself for months, so I wrote "Touching Dream." Then Christmas came and went, so I wrote "Desert." Now Christmas is almost here, and... I'm not going to use that excuse again. And really, the story isn't that Christmasy. So if it's not delivered on time, the world won't end.
Please don't post spoilers in this topic. For spoileresque comments or discussion, please start a new topic that includes the word "spoilers" in the title (and doesn't include any actual spoilers in the title).
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Interesting beginning. Curious to see what happens next.
(posted from the Item Information Page)
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Very well done. I am looking forward to reading more of the story
(posted from the Item Information Page)
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I won't spoil it but I just had to say ...I can't wait for the next chapter.... this is very entertaining so far
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ok I just fnished reading winters Blade: draft......it seemed short ( I know it wasn't tho...just me) I want more...more ..please... your teasing it's not fair......
Seriously tho...take your time make it right.... just hurry
Last edited by dv8n (2006-12-31 18:59:46)
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I like the way this is shaping up....Posted at chapter Run......It's another small dose..but at least they come quickly
(posted from run)
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Howdy,
This needs to be continued quickly. I NEED to know what happens.
Very much enjoying the story. Can't wait for more. (Or was that already obvious?)
(posted from run)
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It occurs to me that some people might think that the chapter just posted, the seventh, titled "last," is the end. And then they might take up torches and pitchforks, because it's hardly a satisfactory ending.
It's not the end. "Last" refers to... well, it should be obvious once you've read it.
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I really like the story so far. Keep up the good work
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yes it is obvious once you read it...thank you for the chapter..it's reducing the withdrawls some....
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Another great chapter 'last'. I can't wait for the next installment. Please keep up the great work.
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Hey Imagineer, It looks like several people like your story...
...they should it's a good story (another shot to help ease the withdrawl pains )
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Oh damn...and the plot thickens... ...no wonder CENSORED BY IMAGINEER keeps them chained up, CENSORED BY IMAGINEER on CENSORED BY IMAGINEER... Damn, no CENSORED BY IMAGINEER, no CENSORED BY IMAGINEER, no CENSORED BY IMAGINEER, little no CENSORED BY IMAGINEER cleptomaniacs... CENSORED BY IMAGINEER needs to CENSORED BY IMAGINEER their CENSORED BY IMAGINEER more
....that's what I think
Great story Imagineer ( I tried not to say anything too Spoiling )
Last edited by dv8n (2007-01-13 01:39:46)
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Just posted the next chapter, "trouble."
Also typo fixes for "storm" and "hide."
Last edited by Imagineer (2007-01-14 05:05:36)
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Trouble is...finished...where's the rest of it....your making me wait?!?!?! What have I ever done to you to get treated like this?!?!? ...WAIT don't answer that
The story is still GREAT... waiting for the next chapter on pins and needles
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Great story so far. Thank you for writing it. It's not ever day I get to see the word macadam in a story
(posted from regret)
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...I'm dying....need story...please bring next chapter....Imagineer....I...feel sooooo...weak....it's getting dark...don't leave me without... the next chapter...must get my fix........please...
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I apologize for the long pause between chapters. Life happens, despite my best efforts to the contrary.
Look for "pitch" next Sunday.
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I knew you were cheating on me with LIFE..... HOW DARE YOU!
...I'm enraged bey....... DID YOU SAY NEXT SUNDAY?!?!?!?!
YEA THERE'S GOING TO BE A NEW STORY...A NEW STORY ....A NEW STORY
*looking around sheepishly* WHAT?!?!?! You all know, I'm just doing what you all are thinking
Seriously Imagineer just do whatever you got to...we'll....just...um sit here biting our nails 'til you post the next chapter OK?
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I wonder if the SuperBowl outcome will affect either the story or the posting? Looking forward to it either way.
There were not nearly enough good commercials!!!!
J-Man5
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Things don't always go according to plan. Couple more days.
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*NOTE MY HORRIFIED EXPRESSION* NNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... It's that bitch LIFE again isn't it....????? You've been seeing HER all along haven't you? *sobbing uncontrollablly* WHAT ABOUT ME? ....WHAT ABOUT MY NEEDS? I DEMAND YOU BREAK IT OFF WITH HER THIS INSTANT! I'll be at mother's until you do!
Hey I do the jealous thing pretty good huh? HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA haha HA
we are ganging up on you
side note take your time imagineer I don't want to read some half baked peice of shit you felt forced to write...I want to read the story that you are happy enough with to decide your ready to post it. the rest of this message was for you to get a laugh
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wow that was worth the wait....but I need more MORE MORE
Did I mention...... Moooooooooorrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeee Please?
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