2017-Jul-14 @ 6:06 PM | |
Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 821 |
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2017-Jul-19 @ 7:08 AM | |
peace2300 Inebriated Member since 2011-Sep-13 Posts: 29 |
Long time no see. The first mind control story that I ever read was by you. I'm curious to know if you ever finished The Book? I'm also loving the new story so far. ----- |
2017-Aug-3 @ 11:47 PM | |
Blackie Contributor Member since 2017-Jul-13 Posts: 72 |
I had three endings for The Book and lost all of them in a disk crash. So I'd have to go revisit the entire story and try to reconstruct the ending from where I left off. In fact, I wouldn't have any copies of the story if it hadn't been preserved on line. I've lost a few of the other stories I wrote from that period as well. Some of the Files of the Institute and a favorite of mine about a teacher I once had. One deals with what one can though. ----- -Himself "Typos are very important to all written form. It gives the reader something to look for so they aren't distracted by the total lack of content in your writing." -Randy K. Milholland |
2017-Aug-4 @ 4:52 AM | |
Blackie Contributor Member since 2017-Jul-13 Posts: 72 |
oh, general recommendation for Psionic science fiction, straight up mainstream stuff. James H. Schmitz. You can google him. ----- -Himself "Typos are very important to all written form. It gives the reader something to look for so they aren't distracted by the total lack of content in your writing." -Randy K. Milholland |
2017-Aug-13 @ 9:35 PM | |
Blackie Contributor Member since 2017-Jul-13 Posts: 72 |
Really awful formatting has been corrected. ----- -Himself "Typos are very important to all written form. It gives the reader something to look for so they aren't distracted by the total lack of content in your writing." -Randy K. Milholland |
2017-Aug-15 @ 1:12 AM | |
LordMhoram Tipsy Member since 2012-Apr-26 Posts: 3 |
What a refreshing surprise. I've really enjoyed your past work and look forward to reading more. ----- |
2017-Aug-25 @ 10:31 PM | |
Darkside_6 Inebriated Member since 2016-Aug-10 Posts: 10 |
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2019-May-23 @ 6:05 AM | |
ptbrainum Tipsy Member since 2019-May-14 Posts: 7 |
the book ----- |
2019-May-23 @ 8:54 AM | |
Blackie Contributor Member since 2017-Jul-13 Posts: 72 |
Funny. I only remember thirteen or fourteen chapters with four or five short Institute stories,teacher, oriental, and two or three others I sent through anon.penet.fi ...and one and only one chapter of Tommy takes charge. One of the missing was a request lesbian piece for a woman I knew off line. ----- -Himself "Typos are very important to all written form. It gives the reader something to look for so they aren't distracted by the total lack of content in your writing." -Randy K. Milholland |
2019-May-24 @ 9:02 AM | |
ptbrainum Tipsy Member since 2019-May-14 Posts: 7 |
you say you came across a chapter twenty? Huh. I don't remember more than fourteen. ----- |
2019-Jun-26 @ 8:36 PM | |
Blackie Contributor Member since 2017-Jul-13 Posts: 72 |
I'll give it some thought. Have been looking it over again and finding horrible spelling in a few places. That alone makes it worth at least a spelling edit on the thing. ----- -Himself "Typos are very important to all written form. It gives the reader something to look for so they aren't distracted by the total lack of content in your writing." -Randy K. Milholland |
2019-Nov-15 @ 12:52 AM | |
Blackie Contributor Member since 2017-Jul-13 Posts: 72 |
I am sure a few folk have noticed I have been stalled lately. ----- -Himself "Typos are very important to all written form. It gives the reader something to look for so they aren't distracted by the total lack of content in your writing." -Randy K. Milholland |
2019-Nov-15 @ 4:58 AM | |
peace2300 Inebriated Member since 2011-Sep-13 Posts: 29 |
Dude, I'm a truck driver so I can say I more then understand the weird working hours. ----- |
I suspect the most I can say here is I just started writing again recently. Not sure how my output will be either in frequency or volume.
As a point of interest. I intend to continue with all my stories but my life does not give much time for writing often. I had problems with The Contribution and am still trying to re-work the outline for it.
All works of course are fiction. Any resemblance to myself or others are purely coincidental and delightful.