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#1 2006-11-29 01:58:23
Picture Perfect
A man discovers a co-worker's secret past, and he confronts her with it.
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#2 2008-04-05 14:26:34
- McHaMER
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Re: Picture Perfect
This is really good...!
(posted from Chapter 1)
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#3 2008-08-02 05:49:54
- NahtanoJ88
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I couldn't remember if I had read this story before so I just had to read it and I have to say it was quite good. It's also funny do to your name change.
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#4 2008-08-02 06:24:00
- Eric Storm
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Re: Picture Perfect
heh. I *SAID* that Eric is a name I've been using for various things for a long time... 
Eric
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#5 2009-07-02 00:23:20
- mjsinjapan
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Re: Picture Perfect
Well that was very nice. The story arc is pretty much finished, so I presume there won't be any more of this one, thanks for writing!
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#6 2009-07-02 02:36:56
- Eric Storm
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Re: Picture Perfect
Nope, no more of this one. It was intended to be for mainstream magazine publication, but I never got around to sending it out.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Eric
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#7 2009-09-14 09:13:28
- Hamlet11
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Re: Picture Perfect
Very nice story. It's refreshing to have a good guy tale once in a while.
I would have liked a delicate sex scene and maybe a little more lead-up before they're suddenly six months together but still good.
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#8 2009-09-14 17:23:06
- Eric Storm
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This story was written for an attempt at actual magazine publication. Hence the shortness of it, and the lack of a sex scene.
It never got published in a magazine, so.... it is here. Glad you liked it despite its shortcomings.
Eric
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