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#1 2006-11-29 01:41:39
Battle for Supremacy
This is a ridiculously silly - but blessedly short - bit I wrote for a group I was visiting one night. It was a literary group, and we had to read something... so I wrote something. There is no erotica in this piece. Read it, if you dare. 
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#2 2006-12-18 10:44:38
- AnimaLynx
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Re: Battle for Supremacy
LMAO Wow! Short and sweet. Deffiently funny too.
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#3 2006-12-21 06:30:33
- Corvis
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Re: Battle for Supremacy
I don't know quite what to say that wouldn't be a spoiler, so I'll just say I enjoyed the story. 
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#4 2006-12-27 12:08:47
- dv8n
- Wasted
- From: East Texas
- Registered: 2006-12-08
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Re: Battle for Supremacy
cute...
:lol:
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#5 2006-12-27 21:52:19
- Eric Storm
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Re: Battle for Supremacy
dv8n:
Due to the content of some of your comments (or lack thereof), I have to wonder: Are you posting just to see yourself speak, or possibly to raise your post count?
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#6 2006-12-28 09:13:12
- dv8n
- Wasted
- From: East Texas
- Registered: 2006-12-08
- Posts: 118
Re: Battle for Supremacy
well neither Net,
I'm just taking what you said at EWp to heart, you said that a lack of community was one of the things you didn't like as well as alot of problems with the admin...so I simply decided that I wanted to say hi and let the author know I like their work and try to support them. I mean like battle for supremacy I liked it ...it was cute but I didn't want to give anything away to those who hadn't read it. if you want a community spirit you start by communicating like a community..... if you look at several of my post they are nothing more than me putting my two cents in where it is not wanted but I had something to say or simply decided it was funny and wanted to participate.... if it has raised my post count, and I noticed yesterday it had, is that a crime? I'm sorry if I talk to much but I like it here I rarely go other places, sometimes do and sometime don't, I check to see if anything interesting is going on a couple times a day when I have a spare moment not doing something...
.. I have also been randomly harrassing the authors to let them know somebody likes their work....you know alot of them have like no input from readers? so I changed that in a couple of cases...and the ones I haven't.....I haven't read more of their work yet ..I'll get to it...
...well um....I geuss after looking this letter over......I like to see mtself talk huh?
...what can I say you guys bring out the herd animal in me.....MOOOOOOOOOO
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#7 2007-12-27 09:28:37
- Quelthias
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Re: Battle for Supremacy
If not for that twist in the end, it would be depressing, instead it is funny.
I one heard that if counted the weight that ants and humans produce in the world, ants will weigh 4x more.
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#8 2008-04-03 15:20:38
- McHaMER
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- Registered: 2008-04-03
- Posts: 10
Re: Battle for Supremacy
After we small humans r gone....the insect will rule....lol
(posted from Chapter 1)
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