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#26 2007-01-28 22:57:25

dv8n
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Re: Stuck on a name

*looking very innocent* no more talk of what?

3dbig_smile

WHAT were we talking about?   I don't remember talking about ANYTHING.

*whistling nervously* Hey Net, do you remember us talking about something?  3dbig_smile


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#27 2007-01-29 17:14:02

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Re: Stuck on a name

Hey i think i got somthing i went to
http://thesaurus.reference.com/search?r … lucination

and found this

<b>delusion</b> is 'deception' which is much stronger than illusion

The Delusion


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#28 2007-01-31 01:30:44

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Re: Stuck on a name

hey neitherspace...I don't really like The Delusion as a name but its up to you

heres one that my mother suffers from....Dementia   3dbig_smile  huh I like the sound of it how about you?       And you might could write it all messed up like  DeMentia naaaaa that screwed up writing thing gets old just one word...but the name is still cool Dementia

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#29 2007-01-31 02:24:21

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Re: Stuck on a name

"Gimmie your purse Bitch" Shouted the man brandishing his long knife, letting the blade catch in the street light

"HELP!" screams the woman as she swings her purse at the muggers head.

"Oh! you pay for that!" the mugger moves to stab her.

Before he could strike the woman becomes wrapped in the shadows that permeated the allyway and just like that she's gone.

"What the fuck?" says the man quite shaken he turns to walk out the alley only to notice there is no exit.

"hehahahah!" came a voice.

"Who, whats going on?"

"I am the punisher of the wicked, the shadows that hunt the darkness." the voice echoed makeing it hard to pin point the sorce "I am The Void."

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hows that sound?


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#30 2007-01-31 11:20:46

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Re: Stuck on a name

Great name, shame about the tense switching... XD

Half of it's in past tense, and half is in present.

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#31 2007-01-31 23:41:11

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Re: Stuck on a name

gimme a break i was just trying to see how it sounded


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#32 2007-02-02 22:57:58

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Re: Stuck on a name

Hey, it wasn't a problem, as such.  I didn't even mean it as a criticism.  I was trying to elicit, perhaps, a grin when you read it, and a response along the lines of "Oh, shut up you".  No barbs to it whatsoever.  And I really do like the name. XD

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#33 2007-02-04 01:20:44

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meh i don't i thought about it and decided it wasn't right


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#34 2007-02-06 15:07:36

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Re: Stuck on a name

hey you could caal him D'void ...hehehe  see it sounds like devoid as in "without any whatever"...and it sounds like somebody with a thick accent saying The Void  which is a "place of emptiness"   ...so you get a double meaning and a cool sounding name that sorta fits your character ....see  more bang for your buck... 3dbig_smile


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#35 2007-02-08 17:17:51

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Re: Stuck on a name

D.void would be a good villain name
real name: Desmond Void (mage of darkness maybe)
after Anton because with his power over shadow it would make him supreme power in the dark


anyway i had a brain storm
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"Gimmie your purse Bitch" Shouts the man brandishing his long knife, letting the blade catch in the street light

"HELP!" screams the woman as she swings her purse at the muggers head.

"Oh! you pay for that!" the mugger moves to stab her.

Before he can strike dark tendrils of shadow spring up around this intended victim wraping them selfs around her the shadows pull the woman into them, just like that the would be mugger is alone

"What the fuck?" says the man quite shaken he turns to walk out the alley only to notice there is no exit.

"hehahahah!" came a voice.

"Who, whats going on?"

"we are the punisher of the wicked, the shadows that hunt the darkness." the voice(s) echoed making it hard to find the scorce.

"What are you?"

a whisper in his left ear declares.

"Nothing"

The rest is silence.

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Better?

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#36 2007-02-16 05:55:32

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Re: Stuck on a name

OH OH I got one   


From the shadows the dark ominous voices cries,"Beware my wrath, I am Masterdebator(the de is silent ).  I will intellectually reduce your plans to idocy.  Then I will reduce my fluid levels all over your boots.  HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAAA HA HA   Quake with fear. "


I like it  3dbig_smile

oh wait it doesn't deal with any shadows besides the ones he stands in while whackin off....oops sorry   3dsad

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#37 2007-02-20 04:48:44

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Re: Stuck on a name

*groan* gods thats horible


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#38 2007-02-21 09:53:21

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Re: Stuck on a name

sometimes comedy is painful....and sometimes pain is comical...sorry neither is what your looking for neitherspace


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#39 2007-08-27 23:47:24

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Thx for the help i settled on Nightwalker this thread helped me throw a few names at the wall and saw if they stuck it was a lot of help


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