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#1 2024-04-01 23:38:06
Cam Show Family
Cam Show Family
A family is held captive and coerced into sex with each other on camera, even the pre-teens and baby.
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#2 2024-04-03 00:29:58
- abaddon.pale
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- Registered: 2018-09-11
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Re: Cam Show Family
While short, only two chapters but still an interesting and edge pushing scenario.
Only real feedback I have to give, because this really was a sort of unusual story, at least from what I read.
Would be,
A) there is a lot of story and detail that could have been told from the start to the end. could have been a much longer story.
B) would be interesting to see a similar story being done from an interview perspective, flashing back and forth between the "Present/Interview" and the "Past/sex changed story environment"
could ether by the captors interviewing him for extra hotness on a video feed. or could be maybe a military unit who has rescued the family, and after hearing the story decide to enslave them again.
Anyway, just some thoughts I had while reading.
All in all it was a good read, as are most if not all of your stories.
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