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#1 2024-03-28 08:31:23
hunt, The
The hunt
It's a slow burn with mundane sex scenes just a minor foray into the unknown.
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#2 2024-03-31 15:23:38
- Dadrepus
- Wasted
- Registered: 2023-01-11
- Posts: 101
Re: hunt, The
Nice start but you should proof-read your chapters before posting to avoid the inevitable complaints about spelling, grammar and missing words. I could list them here but I won’t. Please take this as constructive. This is why this was sent as a personal email.
(posted from chapter 1: Emergence)
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