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#1 2023-09-29 02:18:25

Bridget
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From: The Internet
Registered: 2006-09-09
Posts: 779
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Rosenjack


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#2 2023-09-29 14:05:43

Skyscraper
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From: NC
Registered: 2022-09-13
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Re: Rosenjack

Not bad. Not bad at all. My one critique is that there is no summary. I had no idea what I was getting into when I started.


You're either born with common sense or you're not. I was not.

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#3 2023-09-29 14:42:44

Eric Storm
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Registered: 2006-09-12
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Re: Rosenjack

That is definitely a serious problem that the author needs to address.  Without a story description, how is anyone expected to know whether the story is something that will interest them?  And the default position of most people (unlike Skyscraper, apparently... 3dsmile ) will be to pass the story by in an effort to not waste their time.

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#4 2023-09-29 15:36:35

Skyscraper
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From: NC
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Re: Rosenjack

I admit, most times I would not waste the time (not that I think this particular instance was a waste of my time). However, the name Rosenjack was very intriguing to me

Last edited by Skyscraper (2023-09-29 18:21:38)


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#5 2023-09-30 02:06:00

coeur_minuit
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Registered: 2023-09-23
Posts: 3

Re: Rosenjack

Mea culpa.  Still finding my way around.  I will try to correct the lack of story description post haste.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#6 2023-09-30 12:01:30

Skyscraper
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From: NC
Registered: 2022-09-13
Posts: 20

Re: Rosenjack

I understand the feeling. When I first became a contributor, I felt a little lost too. I have a hang of it now. At least you haven't managed to break the site in any way. I managed to find a way to upload a PDF file. There is a message now at the bottom of the "add item" page that says "If the file is acceptable (and there's just a glitch in the system), your contribution will be posted ASAP."

I do believe that I am the reason for that addition of 'glitch in the system'. That parenthesis didn't exist before I uploaded Rodeo for the first time. 3dangel
That's probably my biggest contribution to the site.


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#7 2023-10-03 14:04:56

pepsiguy1
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Registered: 2012-09-04
Posts: 57

Re: Rosenjack

Not having a story description isn't that bad as long as it's corrected. I went even further and forgot to add a title. Something I corrected, when Eric pointed out my grievous misdeed. Just downloaded the story, so I have no other comments to add.

Pepsiguy1

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#8 2023-10-03 20:40:30

Eric Storm
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From: New Port Richey, FL
Registered: 2006-09-12
Posts: 5752
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Re: Rosenjack

In fairness, had I designed the site correctly, lo those eons ago, you wouldn't have been able to post a story without either of those things.

Eric Storm


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#9 2023-10-26 23:50:44

Dadrepus
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Registered: 2023-01-11
Posts: 100

Re: Rosenjack

Really well written story. I greatly enjoyed it. I continue to be amazed at the talent of the authors on this site.

(posted from Rosenjack)


Always willing to help. May not be good at it ;-)

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