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Eric, I love Agent of Change. I am currently reading 6 sifi deries stories on line. I check them for updates weekly, except Agent of Change, I check that at least once or twice daily. Such an inventive tale. You build the plot, the characters, and the twists with a lot of depth and heart. This is in my humble opinion, the Best story I have read. Sure minor spelling and grammar issues, but damn you keep me coming back for more. Thanks and I hope this story never ends.
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Glad you're enjoying the story. Spelling and Grammar issues? Whatchu talkin' 'bout, Willis?
Eric Storm
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Well if you go to Chapter 11 you will find this:
"Nick Shilling, this is Angelo Fattore, and his daughter, Emma."
"Sir. Ma'am," David said formally. He didn't offer to shake any hands. "Would you care to sit down?" he offered.
I think you cross contaminated your stories. I wouldn't have noticed but I was reading it out loud to my wife and noticed it. Twisting your tail aside I am really enjoying the book and most of the ones I like on your site are the ones you write. Have a good one.
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Ha! You only THINK that's a typo. David is Rachel's cousin who was visiting from out of town, and tends to try to insinuate himself into every situation, even when he really shouldn't.
Eric Storm
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I'd also like to point out that that is neither a spelling error, nor a grammatical one.
Eric Storm
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Eric Storm wrote:
… Spelling and Grammar issues? Whatchu talkin' 'bout, Willis?
I've spent too much time on bulletin boards and forums - - - I tend to read right through those things, especially when the story is good (and Eric is well able to tell a VERY good story)
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Really enjoying this story. Looking forward to the next instalment
(posted from Chapter 23)
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While I haven't had any better idea's, I honestly felt the story was going a slightly different direction. I am mostly just posting to see how wasted I am according to the pub standard.
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Elessar wrote:
While I haven't had any better idea's, I honestly felt the story was going a slightly different direction. I am mostly just posting to see how wasted I am according to the pub standard.
If you feel like I didn't meet your expectation, then you must know what your expectation was. What direction did you think the story was going in?
Eric Storm
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Well, I don't know that you didn't meet my expectations. I do know the direction the story went was not what I was thinking it was going to be. As I said, I don't see any better idea's, it just is not what I had thought it was going to be.
Eric Storm wrote:
Elessar wrote:
While I haven't had any better idea's, I honestly felt the story was going a slightly different direction. I am mostly just posting to see how wasted I am according to the pub standard.
If you feel like I didn't meet your expectation, then you must know what your expectation was. What direction did you think the story was going in?
Eric Storm
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Elessar:
You said:
I don't know that you didn't meet my expectations.
But your very next sentence is:
I do know the direction the story went was not what I was thinking it was going to be.
These statements directly contradict one another. In order for the direction of the story to not be "what [you] [were] thinking it was going to be", two things have to happen:
1. You have an expectation of where the story is going,
and
2. I didn't go there. That is, I did not meet that expectation.
So, my question is, as to point 1: what was your expectation of where the story was going? You have to have had some kind of expectation of where it was going, otherwise I could not have gone in a direction different from what you were expecting, because you wouldn't have been expecting anything.
Eric Storm
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you and your cliff-hangers - -
(posted from Chapter 24)
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Oh you did not just do that. You wait till the climax then blue balled us. Now we have to wait for the climax again. Sheesh. Bitching about the end aside it was as great as always. Keep it up. HEHEHEHE
(posted from Chapter 24)
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Cliffhanger? What y'all talkin' about? I didn't do no cliffhanger...
hehehe
Eric Storm
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Waiting on chapter 19. Very good story so far. Thanks
(posted from Chapter 18)
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Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for the feedback.
Eric Storm
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Good story development and good product development within the story.
I really like Nick's last statement though.
(posted from Chapter 25)
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Thoroughly enjoying the story. But wait! Where is the cliffhanger. Haha. Cliffhangers not necessary.
Pepsiguy1
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Cliffhangers. He would never. Nick on the other hand lol.
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What do you mean Nick leaving you with a cliffhanger? He gives multiple orgasms not multiple cliffhangers. He doesn't want to leave his women hanging unless its in his dungeon. LOL.
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goldragon69 wrote:
He doesn't want to leave his women hanging unless its in his dungeon.
Nick's not a murderer. Leaving the average person suspended for more than a couple hours will likely kill them.
Eric Storm
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How are the chapters passed 20 accessed?
(posted from Chapter 20)
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Bt2022 wrote:
How are the chapters passed 20 accessed?
1. Be patient. They will eventually be made public.
2. Do something insanely nice for me. Figuring out what this might be is left to you.
3. Make a qualifying donation, for which you will receive a thank-you gift of special access, which allows you to access PRM material.
Eric Storm
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Just wanted to let you know that I've really enjoyed reading what you've posted so far. (I even followed #3 above just to finish what was there... really worth it)
I'm enjoying the technology and the way that he's managed to work with his women and make them follow his commands. In a way he's still a little TOO lenient on them, but he's learning and I can't wait to see how he does. And, his symbiote (no not THAT show) is right. He is way behind in his quota!! Can't wait to see him catch up on that as well.
Keep at it, and know that we look forward to your posts. We patiently (mostly) wait for more.
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Well, I'm glad someone liked it. If the response to this last chapter is any indicator, you were the only one.
Eric Storm
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