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#1 2016-11-29 21:40:29

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David's Key

David's Key

Chapter 1 Coming Soon!

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#2 2016-12-01 07:03:00

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Re: David's Key

The submitted preface, was; well different, it was good but very different.  Slightly confusing on a few aspects but that's just the way I read it.  Overall it's pretty fair of a sorry.

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#3 2016-12-01 08:18:50

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Re: David's Key

Elessar wrote:

The submitted preface, was; well different, it was good but very different.  Slightly confusing on a few aspects but that's just the way I read it.  Overall it's pretty fair of a sorry.

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I might be able to explain a few things if I knew what it was that you are confused about.

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#4 2016-12-09 15:53:40

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Re: David's Key

Life has been getting in the way lately (dont yall just love it) but i havent given in. im working bit by bit on the first chapter when i have some free time (aka when im not sleeping or working). i would really like to hear some feed back on the section i have submitted, the input of others helps me and drives me, please help me in creating a great story.

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