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2017-Feb-12 @ 10:51 AM | |
Admin God Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 493 |
Toy Master ----- |
2017-Feb-15 @ 7:19 AM | |
Maverick7508 Inebriated Member since 2012-Feb-4 Posts: 18 |
So happy to see you back man. Missed you work. ----- |
2017-Feb-18 @ 8:24 PM | |
afitzroy Tipsy Member since 2012-Jul-29 Posts: 3 |
Really awesome story. I liked the way you played Tom, not a lot of back story but you really felt like you know him. ----- |
2017-Mar-15 @ 9:35 AM | |
Maverick7508 Inebriated Member since 2012-Feb-4 Posts: 18 |
I can't wait for the rest of the re-worked chapters and then for the new material. You do good work man. ----- |
2017-May-6 @ 3:37 AM | |
Crusader Wasted Member since 2007-Jul-19 Posts: 109 |
Neat! Never knew that there was more then 1 chapter of this. I'm liking it so far. ----- |
2017-May-6 @ 4:09 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 3822 |
Without digging deep into the database, I can't know for sure, but from looking at the web page code for the story, it would appear that the story was submitted as plain text, rather than as an HTML file. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- AMEN! >>> Word Crimes |
2017-May-6 @ 4:16 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 3822 |
Update: ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- AMEN! >>> Word Crimes |
2017-May-6 @ 10:24 AM | |
James Marcus Contributor Member since 2010-Jun-15 Posts: 76 |
Chapter one has reviewed a Major rewrite. I added a lot more showing and details in the beginning, I know it needs more work and I plan on doing so, but would like feedback on what was changed, what works what does not work and what changes would you like to see. What areas would you like to see expanded upon. ----- |
2017-May-6 @ 6:23 PM | |
Crusader Wasted Member since 2007-Jul-19 Posts: 109 |
Eric,
James, ----- |
2017-May-7 @ 12:32 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 3822 |
Just as a note for the future: ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- AMEN! >>> Word Crimes |
2017-May-8 @ 10:49 PM | |
Crusader Wasted Member since 2007-Jul-19 Posts: 109 |
Other the following I will keep the info in mind. thanks.
nope. ----- |
2018-Jan-30 @ 8:53 AM | |
brewbox Tipsy Member since 2016-Sep-18 Posts: 4 |
Far too many spelling errors, spoils the whole thing ----- |
2018-Jan-31 @ 1:17 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 3822 |
And this bit of upbeat 'encouragement' will surely spur him on to improve his writing and give you more to read. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- AMEN! >>> Word Crimes |
2018-Feb-1 @ 1:51 PM | |
James Marcus Contributor Member since 2010-Jun-15 Posts: 76 |
Thank you for the feedback, unfortunately I lost my main editor and sadly spelling and grammar are not my strong points. ----- |
2018-Feb-12 @ 10:58 AM | |
James Marcus Contributor Member since 2010-Jun-15 Posts: 76 |
Chapter 1 has been edited and Re-Posted. ----- |
2018-Feb-17 @ 12:11 PM | |
what-not Tipsy Member since 2012-Feb-14 Posts: 1 |
Since I'm a terrible speller, I would (almost) never comment on spelling but your using barley (the grain in beer) instead of barely in a couple of chapters reminded me of Vanessa Ravencroft who had the habit of making that mistake about a dozen times in each chapter.
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