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2018-Aug-7 @ 9:07 AM
James Marcus
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Daddy_Lenin wrote:

Sdragon wrote:

agreed and i apologize, what i am referring to is how the chem teacher is not wearing any underwear but after all the sex she has her underwear on her. i might have read it wrong which would be just like me to do.

Just bringing this up again, because it hasn't been fixed. In Chapter 6 Mrs. Crabtree says "I took my Bra off just before you got here, my panties too." She never puts them back on, but in Chapter 7 you say "...her white bra pushed up exposing her ample breasts."

The continuity error should be fixed now.


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2018-Aug-7 @ 9:17 AM
James Marcus
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DaveGrous wrote:

I did not like that one! Having sex with a pre-teen girl is sick!!!

(posted from chapter 15: Lust)

Sir, sorry I missed your response to Chapter 15, unfortunately this story will contain a lot more sex with pre-teen girls, some of whom may be younger than Grace. If you do not like this, then unfortunately this story or any other story I write, will not be for you, as most of my readers have expressed a desire for them to go in that direction. What I can assure you will never be in my stories are, Necro, Snuff, Water Sports, Beastiality, Scat, Guro, Male on Male, Fem-Dom. Pretty much anything thing else can and probably will happen, if requested by my readers.

Thank you for reading my story so far and your feedback.

James


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2018-Aug-7 @ 5:49 PM
Crusader
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Crusader wrote:

Interesting, very interesting. I look forward to reading more.

because you are directly asking for feedback on the age of the girls, I personally prefer the women in stories to have secondary sexual characteristics.

This may be the most obtuse way i have ever said "old enough to have tits please"

Anyhow im off to read the latest chapter.

Edit: typo


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2018-Aug-7 @ 6:41 PM
James Marcus
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Crusader wrote:

Crusader wrote:

Interesting, very interesting. I look forward to reading more.

because you are directly asking for feedback on the age of the girls, I personally prefer the women in stories to have secondary sexual characteristics.

This may be the most obtuse way i have ever said "old enough to have tits please"

Anyhow im off to read the latest chapter.

Edit: typo

Don't worry there will be plenty of teens and adult women in the story as well. wink


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2018-Aug-8 @ 1:37 PM
SkiesEnd
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Hope you overcome the blockage as I am sure it has to be frustrating for you as much as us readers.

Thank you for sharing your work as I am getting alot of enjoyment from it.

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2018-Sep-4 @ 11:58 AM
DoomCock
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Chapter 17 was a great addition, but far too short for my taste.

A request: definitely revisit the mindscape and have him fuck his "daughter" some more.  That was hawt. tongue

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2018-Sep-9 @ 11:41 AM
ctrigger30
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this story is perfect chapter 17 is to short for my taste. maybe for the future his daugher can be made real  and he can have his way with her in the real world

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2018-Sep-26 @ 9:25 AM
James Marcus
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Chapter 19 and 20 will be posted on Friday.


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2018-Oct-9 @ 11:15 AM
ctrigger30
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When is the next part coming out

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2018-Oct-9 @ 11:20 AM
James Marcus
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ctrigger30 wrote:

When is the next part coming out

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I'm now working on the next Chapter for Toy Master, then a few other stories, A Perfect ten, has two chapters in editing. I also plan on working the next chapter in Fateless sometime soon. So it might be a while before I get back to Just a Taste.


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2018-Oct-16 @ 1:56 PM
Elessar
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I have to say, there’s a few parts I had to skip over, over all the story was good, several misspellings, grammatical errors, I think even names got switched once.

However, aside from the really short chapters, the pedo sex, I managed to see a really good story. There’s a few things that make me think, “what in the hell?”. Which is fine cause it makes me think about the background, what’s happened up to this point, etc.

I personally feel that to much of the story was taken away from Aaron, they seemed like a good pair. If focused more on everybody and everything else. And the feelings for drew that had no bases was... well confusing to say the least. Over all well done. I look forward to more.

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2018-Oct-17 @ 10:26 AM
James Marcus
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Elessar wrote:

I have to say, there’s a few parts I had to skip over, over all the story was good, several misspellings, grammatical errors, I think even names got switched once.

However, aside from the really short chapters, the pedo sex, I managed to see a really good story. There’s a few things that make me think, “what in the hell? . Which is fine cause it makes me think about the background, what’s happened up to this point, etc.

I personally feel that to much of the story was taken away from Aaron, they seemed like a good pair. If focused more on everybody and everything else. And the feelings for drew that had no bases was... well confusing to say the least. Over all well done. I look forward to more.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

Aaron and Andrew will have more time together next chapter. There will also be a bit of exploration into the Drew issue as well.


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2018-Oct-18 @ 6:32 AM
Elessar
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Aaron and Andrew will have more time together next chapter. There will also be a bit of exploration into the Drew issue as well.

Please don't think i'm insinuating anything gay between them. It was simply a thought about their friendship, brawn and brains working together. I look forward to the clarifications with Drew. Thank you.


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2018-Oct-18 @ 10:37 AM
James Marcus
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Elessar wrote:

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Aaron and Andrew will have more time together next chapter. There will also be a bit of exploration into the Drew issue as well.

Please don't think i'm insinuating anything gay between them. It was simply a thought about their friendship, brawn and brains working together. I look forward to the clarifications with Drew. Thank you.

No Insinuation taken, M/M is something I will never have in my stories, though there may be a few men magically transformed into women.


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2018-Oct-23 @ 11:41 AM
Sdragon
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James Marcus wrote:

No Insinuation taken, M/M is something I will never have in my stories, though there may be a few men magically transformed into women.

yes, but which male getting transformed would be the interesting part. would the "hero" become the "heroin", or will it be their best friend? the options are almost limitless for this twisted gender bender plot scheme.


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2018-Oct-23 @ 3:01 PM
Elessar
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Sdragon wrote:

James Marcus wrote:

No Insinuation taken, M/M is something I will never have in my stories, though there may be a few men magically transformed into women.

yes, but which male getting transformed would be the interesting part. would the "hero" become the "heroin", or will it be their best friend? the options are almost limitless for this twisted gender bender plot scheme.

Technically it doesn’t even have to be a male turned female. Could be visa versus.... female turned male? Something of an accident?


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2018-Oct-24 @ 12:22 AM
Eric Storm
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Elessar, the original comment was about the (im)possibility of male-male sex in the story.  Thus, turning a woman into a guy for the purposes of sex would not be something the author would be interested in.  I'm pretty sure he was suggesting the idea of sex occurring after the guy had been turned into a woman, thus ending up with male-female sex (even if still a bit mentally squicky...).

Eric Storm

PS: the phrase is "vice versa"  (Sorry, tried, but could not resist this correction...)


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2018-Oct-24 @ 12:27 PM
James Marcus
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Eric Storm wrote:

Elessar, the original comment was about the (im)possibility of male-male sex in the story.  Thus, turning a woman into a guy for the purposes of sex would not be something the author would be interested in.  I'm pretty sure he was suggesting the idea of sex occurring after the guy had been turned into a woman, thus ending up with male-female sex (even if still a bit mentally squicky...).

Eric Storm

PS: the phrase is "vice versa"  (Sorry, tried, but could not resist this correction...)

Exactly, basically the guy and his lover are both transsexual, Male to female, but since the story takes place in the 80's when that was not as openly accepted, they are hiding as a gay couple. When they get affected by the Main Characters powers they are transformed into actual women. Everyone remembers that they were once male, but now they are female. and under the MC's control.


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2019-Feb-11 @ 6:09 PM
ctrigger30
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when is the next chapter coming out

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2019-Feb-11 @ 8:34 PM
James Marcus
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Next chapter is with the editor, once I get it from him it will be released.


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2019-Feb-14 @ 1:37 AM
ctrigger30
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looking forward to the next chapter this last chapter was realy short

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2019-Feb-16 @ 1:22 PM
James Marcus
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Chapter 22 is with the editor now. only 7-8 more chapters until book one is completed.


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2019-Mar-7 @ 3:10 PM
ctrigger30
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when is the next chapter coming out

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2019-Mar-7 @ 9:21 PM
Eric Storm
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I would like to point out (for the 4,612th time) that this question, especially when posed by itself, is exceedingly rude.

Eric Storm


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2019-Apr-23 @ 1:30 AM
James Marcus
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Okay started on Chapter 23 yesterday and finished part 1 of the four parts. This chapter is going to be the longest chapter I have written yet, it will contain at least two sex scenes and one hell of a twist ending. The first part is already 2,168 words. If I can keep myself motivated and writing a bit a day I should have the chapter finished and to the editor by the end of the week.


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