| 2016-Nov-18 @ 3:17 AM | |
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Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 782 |
An Angel of Mercy ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
| 2016-Nov-18 @ 2:22 PM | |
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Sniper Inebriated Member since 2016-Jul-5 Posts: 94 |
A really beautiful story. And the first in the pub that brought tears to my eyes. Maybe it is because it hits too close to home. I know that look you are talking about, how the item in your hands draws you towards it. But let's not get consumed in melancholy. You touched something deep inside of me. Thank you for that. ----- |
| 2016-Nov-22 @ 5:27 AM | |
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Homeinindy2 Tipsy Member since 2016-Jun-29 Posts: 8 |
Read this story yesterday and had to come back and comment. I really "loved" this story. I like the play on the comments of a movie, will provide you a spoiler, sorry, and the whole premise of this story. I Have read all of your other stories and this is another in a long list of great stories and plots that I have come to enjoy. Thank you ----- |
| 2016-Nov-22 @ 8:42 AM | |
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auguy86 Contributor Member since 2016-Jun-22 Posts: 13 |
You guys are too kind. Very glad to hear that you enjoyed my work. This story was a concept I've had in mind for some time, but never could think of the best context for it. When a Christmas contest was announced on another website, it struck me as the perfect setting for the girl doomed to die of cancer falling in love with a young man desperate for confidence. I'm glad I pulled it off, judging by your reactions. Thanks again for reading!
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| 2016-Nov-23 @ 9:59 PM | |
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Freon22 Wasted Member since 2011-Aug-17 Posts: 123 |
Very good story, I have to say I got teary eyed reading it.
----- “Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power.” ― Abraham Lincoln |
| 2016-Dec-11 @ 6:23 AM | |
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Regod Tipsy Member since 2010-May-11 Posts: 4 |
Wow...just wow. ----- |
| 2017-Nov-6 @ 9:40 PM | |
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Seumus1 Inebriated Member since 2017-Sep-28 Posts: 18 |
Just beautiful! Got seriously misty at the end. Bravo! ----- |
| 2017-Nov-16 @ 7:01 AM | |
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Josh.Bond Inebriated Member since 2014-Mar-11 Posts: 84 |
This is an awesome story. I have been in that situation before. Why I am still here, there are times I don't know. And there are times I hope it is for some higher reason. Guess it will just take time to realize what it is. ----- |
| 2023-Jan-26 @ 9:49 AM | |
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Dadrepus Wasted Member since 2023-Jan-12 Posts: 101 |
Ok, first story that brought me to tears. Excellent in every way. Thanks! ----- Always willing to help. May not be good at it ;-) |