2008-Mar-13 @ 5:08 AM | |
Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 779 |
Post General Comments to the Contributor Here. ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
2008-Mar-13 @ 7:13 PM | |
megamaster87 Tipsy Member since 2008-Jan-30 Posts: 6 |
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2008-Mar-14 @ 8:20 AM | |
unknown1000u2 Contributor Member since 2008-Feb-4 Posts: 76 |
Mega - not only do you get to re-read them, but only the re-edited version of book 1 will be posted here. It will read much smoother. Hope you enjoy it more than the last time. ----- |
2008-Mar-28 @ 7:26 AM | |
Drumspell Tipsy Member since 2006-Dec-19 Posts: 3 |
Writing Style ----- Lost My Mind - Might Come Back Some Day Of Course, That Is Up To Itself To Decide |
2008-Mar-28 @ 8:51 AM | |
siath Wasted Member since 2006-Sep-17 Posts: 101 |
Welcome to the pub Unknown1000u2, Sorry I have been a bit busy lately. Trying to be around more though. ----- |
2008-Apr-25 @ 5:25 AM | |
unknown1000u2 Contributor Member since 2008-Feb-4 Posts: 76 |
I have posted through chapter 13 on the pub of Book one. Caution: don't start reading chapter 12 unless you have time to read chapter 13 also. Major cliff-hanger. ----- |
2008-May-17 @ 7:51 AM | |
unknown1000u2 Contributor Member since 2008-Feb-4 Posts: 76 |
As some of you who have read my stories on other sites may know, there is an important character in My Girls Book two named Cire. He is a cat, a Bengal to be exact. His character was copied after my cat, also a Bengal. ----- |
2008-Nov-28 @ 9:32 AM | |
unknown1000u2 Contributor Member since 2008-Feb-4 Posts: 76 |
Ok, I've changed my mind. I'm just going to post the rest of book 1 here without waiting to re-edit it. It's taking too long (my fault, not the editor). I will repost each chapter as I re-edit it. That way, I can get book 1 on here and then get going on book 2 and 3 here. I wilkl likely finish posting book 1 Thanksgiving week. Just keep in mind that I am eventually cleaning up Book 1. ----- |
2008-Dec-14 @ 10:35 PM | |
unknown1000u2 Contributor Member since 2008-Feb-4 Posts: 76 |
Ok, I'm finally getting around to posting the resat of My Girls as I promised to do over Thanksgiving weekend. Just keep in mind that everything beyond chapter 22 has not had the re-editing that is being worked on. I will repost those chapters as they are done and announce them here. Just be kind... this was my first story I wrote, so it desperately needs the re-editing, at least in my opinion. The re-editing will not change the content or the story... I have added a few sentences here and there, but nothing significant. It just changes sentence structure, wording, spelling, etc. ----- |
2009-Feb-12 @ 1:52 PM | |
DarkStage Inebriated Member since 2009-Feb-9 Posts: 17 |
I agree this is an amazing story. The suspense keeps you going, dreading when you are reaching the end of the list of chapters. I checked 4 times today to see if Chapter 18 of My Girls III was posted yet. I am glad to see that it has. Thank you!! ----- |
2009-Dec-19 @ 11:16 PM | |
unknown1000u2 Contributor Member since 2008-Feb-4 Posts: 76 |
I posted chapter 43. This sets the stage for the last battles. ----- |
2010-Jul-17 @ 10:00 AM | |
tploy Tipsy Member since 2007-Jul-21 Posts: 7 |
MyGirls3 ----- |
2010-Jul-27 @ 6:47 AM | |
unknown1000u2 Contributor Member since 2008-Feb-4 Posts: 76 |
Chapter 48 is being posted tonight. ----- |
2010-Jul-27 @ 6:51 AM | |
unknown1000u2 Contributor Member since 2008-Feb-4 Posts: 76 |
I'm posting chapter 48 today. I know it has been a long time coming, but it is by far the longest chapter I have written. It's 80 pages in Microsoft Word. ----- |
2010-Sep-3 @ 12:57 AM | |
Caliburn Tipsy Member since 2010-Aug-28 Posts: 7 |
Please release the epilogue to book III! I can't wait to finish up book III and I've got so many questions and worries about how Megan handles the recent situation about who they found in that closet, what Aurora meant when she scolded Amy about losing what she valued and cherished the most (please please don't destroy her monogamy with Patrick!) because she's already been completely devastated through-out this entire third book and that's not right, and ... I'm just so worried about Amy and Patrick and Megan! Please give this book a truly happy ending! Please give me some closure! I'm being kept up at night! ^^; ----- |
2010-Oct-17 @ 3:48 AM | |
mdarshiva Tipsy Member since 2010-Oct-1 Posts: 1 |
He said it far better than I could more please ----- |
2011-Jan-15 @ 11:33 AM | |
StoryJunkie Wasted Member since 2010-Dec-31 Posts: 191 |
I too am looking for the second half of the Epilogue for book 3, I liked this first book, then as the story took over, I just couldn't stop reading....I have spent 3 days doing nothing but reading this story. I feel lost not knowing how it ends.... ----- |
2011-Jan-15 @ 11:59 AM | |
unknown1000u2 Contributor Member since 2008-Feb-4 Posts: 76 |
Don't worry, the second half of the epilogue is coming, I haven't given up on it. I've got 25 microsoft Word pages already written and am working on it every day. ----- |
2017-Oct-23 @ 7:07 PM | |
timemaster Tipsy Member since 2017-Oct-7 Posts: 1 |
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2017-Nov-3 @ 10:05 PM | |
Halthasar Tipsy Member since 2013-Jun-2 Posts: 8 |
My belief, its the ancient evil. ----- |
Thank you for looking at my work. Currently, it consists of three stories, titled My Girls, My Girls II, and My Girls III. Books 1 and 2 are finished, Book 3 is still being written. I am currently re-editing Book 1, so I will post the first 10 chapters that are already done, and continue posting as I finish them. After book one is posted, I will then post book 2 pretty quickly, as I don't think it will need to be re-edited.
For those who wonder, this is my first experience at writing. I heavily edit my own work, but I also now use an editor, Tajod, to help me edit. That is why book one is being redone. It was all edited by me and now I am having him catch what I missed.
I am including a synopsis of the works as a whole at the end of this profile. I will include a short description with each story. Please note that the story and character pairing codes are for each story as a whole, so something may be listed that has not occurred at that time in the story.
These are erotic stories, but they are Science fiction / fantasy stories also. I don't do sex just for sex sake. There is plenty of sex in these stories, but only where it helps tell the story. There is action and plenty of character development also. Also, give book one a chance. The real story behind the story doesn't even start to become apparent until chapter 11 or 12.
According to my readers, I love plot twists and surprises. If you don't like something about the story plot (favorite character dies, bad things happen, etc) stick around. There may be a plot twist you will just love!
Thanks for giving me a chance to entertain you with these stories. I hope you enjoy reading them as much as I enjoy writing them.
Oh, BTW, I love to discuss the stories, explain things that seem off, etc. You can either e-mail me or post on the forum. I am also very receptive to any errors, etc. that you find in the stories. I will correct.
One final thing - I have elected to write these stories in first person, from Patrick's point of view. It makes it really interesting. The downside is that, if he doesn't know something, neither do you as a reader. This sometimes makes things confusing and complicated, or they seem to not make sense. Be assured that nothing goes into my stories that doesn't have a purpose. It will surface again later if it doesn't seem to make sense. In most cases, there is enough info there to figure it out, if you have a twisted brain like mine! Don't feel bad if you can't. It will be revealed later. I seldom if ever forget a plot line, no matter how obscure. My goal is to have something suddenly explode in your brain as it is revealed, then have you look at it and say 'oh, yeah, I see where that came from... now.'.
Description of Series as a whole:
Amy and Cindi are 14 years old, twin sisters, and cheerleaders. They are very close to each other. Sometimes, they almost seem to be able to read each others minds, but hey, that's the way twins are, right? They have no idea how wrong they are! Their parents, Patrick and Victoria, are really neat, as parents go. Almost not embarrassing at all. They seem to have secrets, but hey, all parents do, don't they? The girls have no idea how wrong they are about that either! Enjoy the fun, tears and surprises. Oh, and by the way, what's up with all these twins, and why are they all girls?
Good reading!
Unknown1000u2