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#1 2006-11-29 03:07:41

Bridget
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CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Two sons of Ron Chaffey set out to find him.

Sequel to CAMP: Ron's Journey

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#2 2006-12-05 05:39:37

SlaveMaster
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

cant wait for more im just quivering in my boots


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#3 2006-12-09 00:40:57

dv8n
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

I agree...but I'm unhappy with the very last bit..his mom...his friend..just too sad


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#4 2006-12-09 08:34:58

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

dident you see it coming dawn had rons child, dawn hated Psionics and ron conferms that his son also has the ablility.


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#5 2006-12-09 19:10:14

RED_FOX87
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

I loved the first story, and I love this one. I hope to see more soon.


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#6 2006-12-09 22:04:08

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

All right heres the miilion dollor question. Can we expect more with this month or so?3droll


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#7 2006-12-09 23:33:58

Eric Storm
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Do the words "Novel/Series Inactive" not mean ANYTHING to you?  If not, try looking it up in the FAQ...

Net Wolf


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#8 2006-12-10 01:25:02

dracaiel
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

I am sorry to see that it is inactive... seems like a good start to the story.

Net Wolf,

Just wanted to give you a heads up that while I don't think it actually needs to be there (Inactive is pretty self explanatory 3dsmile) I did not see a mention of those in the FAQ.  I could be blind though.

Thanks,

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#9 2006-12-10 07:09:21

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

sorry i just dident see the words inactive the color on the moniter i going so im getting 
a new one tommorow


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#10 2006-12-24 08:38:35

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

I hope this isn't taken the wrong way.

I am not going to be the guy who asks you to "hurry up" or "get it done" or anything like that. I dont have THAT much of an inflated ego. I just really hope, as I'm sure alot of others do that "inactive" doesn't mean "canceled". This story really got off to a terrific start. I'm not going to dictate to you at what speed you should release this. You write what you want, at your own pace, and I completely respect that. I just wanted to say to you, in the hopes that you one day revisit this story, that ALOT of people are looking foward to the possible eventual continuation of this story.

thank you,
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#11 2006-12-24 20:01:27

Eric Storm
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

For any story on the site, there are four possible status codes:
* Completed - self explanatory
* In Progress - should also be self-explanatory
* Inactive - Not being worked on currently, or in the near future
* Abandoned - Will never be worked on in the foreseeable future

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#12 2006-12-30 04:47:50

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Well first of all I'm glad to find that your still writing.   CAMP was the first Mind Control tale that I ever read when I came on line a few years ago.   It blew me away.   What I had read was posted on MCStories and wasn't complete, which left me with that nagging wonder of 'what happened?' to them all.  Then a few years later I found the complete CAMP sage on our older site and got to enjoy it.  Always wondered if you would do a follow up to it!   Then on a fluke I was re-reading CAMP earlier today and went to MCStories.   I found the link to this site and got blessed with a new CAMP tale!   

Nathan so far appears to be a great person to read about.  I was sad to see what happened to Gina as well as how Dawn treated him.   I'm looking forward to seeing how things shape up from here out and if Nathan will get to met more of his family.   Also I get the feeling that 'Viper' is going to get a shock when he runs across Nathan!

-j-

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#13 2007-02-05 21:54:44

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

pleazzzzz continue the story plz plz


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#14 2007-03-16 08:09:31

Pariah
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Silently, antisapating more. 3dyikes

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#15 2007-07-07 23:31:55

ivbeenviolated
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Hey im not tryin to be pushy or anything but camp;sr s shaping up as a great fic and i was wondering if you are going to update anytime soon i know it says inactive but i and many others sincerly hopes that does not mean ended, i know at least 10 people in my local pub who have found and read your camp stories without being told about them.....that just proves how big this thing has gotten........damn dude you are FAMOUS!!!!!i know that you have a mountain of other projects that you feel the need to complete but seriously you have to do something like get rons journey published or just finish sibling rivalry................no pressure


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#16 2007-07-07 23:40:51

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

acording to net wolf its going to be a long time before he posts chapter 3

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#17 2007-08-03 16:33:17

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Seriously, why would he do something like that. Camp is one of his most (if not most) popular stories. Like 90% of the people who like his work started reading it after reading camp.

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#18 2007-08-03 22:36:10

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

he wrote the first two chapters a long time ago but never posted them he then asked if we fans wanted to read the first two chapters with the understanding that he was not working on the story at that time and had no intenion of working on it anytime soon

he wanted to work on the stories that are closer to being finished first so he would not have as many stories to work on at one time.

after that we will just have to wait and see if he works on csr or something else

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#19 2007-08-03 23:16:49

Eric Storm
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

RED_FOX87 wrote:

Seriously, why would he do something like that. Camp is one of his most (if not most) popular stories. Like 90% of the people who like his work started reading it after reading camp.

Two reasons.

1. Because I have other stories that are far older, yet not finished, and those tales need to be finished off first.

2. Because I write on what interests me at the time.  If you happen to enjoy what interests me at the time, dandy.  Otherwise... oh well.

Net Wolf


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#20 2007-08-19 10:19:24

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

bud I know you have lots of things that you are working on at the moment, and that you will get around to adding to the story at some point. All we your avid readers ask is that you dont forget about the story as it has all the halmarks of one of your best , and besides I think Ron got used and abused so he needs some good fortune and closure in his life hopefully a reconsiliation with the rest of his family

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#21 2007-08-20 11:54:36

tylerfalconnils
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Poor Net Wolf as a writers day goes he finds insperation here and there. Needing to jot down notes that come to mind and what not. He has a life to. Shure We all enjoy his stories every one of them I for one really like camp and can't wate. But patience of understanding goes. LEAVE THE POOR MAN ALONE your just giveing him writers cramp lol. Good luck NW and thanks

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#22 2007-08-31 02:19:13

Miss. Black Heart
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From: Victoria, Australia
Registered: 2007-08-30
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

Awww Damn I really want to read more of this story. I dont care how you write it because its your story , as long as you do. I have an uncontrolable need to read more of this story. i'm a little weird i guess but I LOVE CAMP!!! <3

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#23 2007-09-05 00:08:42

epsileth
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

wow good story. if it's anything like CAMP you may have another winner on your hands 3dsmile

can't wait for the next part, keep 'em coming!

(posted from Chapter 2)

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#24 2007-09-11 01:48:34

bradis
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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

holy crap i started reading the series and loved it. then i just found this i was so sad that it only had 2 chapters but i cant wait to read it when u finish i love your work

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#25 2007-09-26 20:31:17

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Re: CAMP: Sibling Rivalry

I would love to read more of this story I hope you add too it soon 
Draconis74  :}

(posted from Chapter 2)

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