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#1 2006-11-29 02:07:49
Where the Maiasaurs Roam
The science team from Harrison Central Academy has won the National Science Competition, and earned a trip back in time. They choose to visit the Late Cretaceous Period: the time of the dinosaurs.
All is well and good, until something goes horribly wrong. Will they survive until the end of their vacation? Will they, in fact, go home?
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#2 2006-12-04 17:22:25
- medico69
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Re: Where the Maiasaurs Roam
I like chapter 2 now starts the wait for chapter 3. It is my personal opinion that you have been inactive tooo long ( but I also remember the reasons). It is great to have you back and writing again.
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#3 2006-12-13 02:01:14
- Vivendi
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The story's great so far. It's been a really long time since I've read chapter 1, so had to go back and read that before reading chapter 2.
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#4 2007-07-14 23:02:42
- ivbeenviolated
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hey net this is pretty good butur probly workin on a shitload of other things rite no so il not ask you to get back to tis straight away!!!! soon though?
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#5 2007-07-15 00:51:34
- Eric Storm
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Re: Where the Maiasaurs Roam
I'm glad you're enjoying it. I will tell you, though, that right now I'm trying to finish up projects that are closer to their ending than Maiasaurs is. I'm trying to get the number of open projects on my plate down, so that I won't go so long between updates on any particular item.
Thanks for the feedback, though.
Net Wolf
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#6 2008-04-17 11:55:34
- Zjoske
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Great story so far. I hope RL will get back in order for you so you can continue with your amazing stories.
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#7 2008-10-30 01:40:41
- AvidReader
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Another great story! Just one thing. Why is Laura such a bitch? She either needs to come to some kind of understanding of herself so she can let go of her demons or she needs to be taught a lesson. Anyway keep up the good work!
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#8 2008-10-30 16:32:27
- Eric Storm
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Does there have to be a reason for someone to be an asshole? Some people just... ARE. 
Eric
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#9 2009-09-06 04:32:54
- Storymaster69
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Re: Where the Maiasaurs Roam
Hey I just finished reading Chapter 1 through 3. Sorry it took so long but I'm a slow reader.
I will admit that especially the first chapter dragged a bit with all the technical details about dinosaurs, but somewhere in the middle of chapter 2 and all the way through chapter 3 the real story started to get going and from then on I started really enjoying it. You are stretching my suspension of disbelief a bit with the whole premise of the story. I'm not sure if I can fully accept that any organization, that basically sends people on time travel tours, would send a people alone without an "expert" into uncharted territory. Putting that aside however it is an enjoyable story and I hope you do continue to work on it more.
I do have a few other suggestions but I will not go into those here so as to avoid potential spoilers. We can discuss them in chat some time.
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#10 2009-10-10 01:58:52
- Hakhazar
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I just found this, and enjoyed it very much. I'm looking forward to more, whenever (soon, soon! <G>) it comes.
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#11 2009-10-10 02:39:22
- Eric Storm
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Re: Where the Maiasaurs Roam
Glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for the feedback.
Eric
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#12 2009-10-10 15:23:05
- rockhauler114
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Another Great storie from one of the best writers around the net!
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#13 2009-10-10 17:36:43
- Eric Storm
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Re: Where the Maiasaurs Roam
Thanks. Glad you're enjoying it. Hopefully Maiasaurs 4 (which I am currently working on) won't take too long to get finished.
Of course, it will go into PRM first, so if you don't have donator access.......... 
Eric Storm
PS: Like the new emoticons? I know they're kinda big, but the other ones were so ugly...
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#14 2009-12-20 20:59:26
- rsheen
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Great story. I am really looking forward to the continuation. The pace and tone of the story has really come together in the last chapter.
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#15 2010-01-01 20:37:55
- ltak2003
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Great story! I hope you decide to continue it some day. Thank you! Jose
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#16 2010-01-23 04:52:11
- Hakhazar
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I'm confused - I remember reading chapter four before this, but it's just been posted here. Was this an update?
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#17 2010-01-23 05:04:55
- Eric Storm
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Re: Where the Maiasaurs Roam
You did not read chapter four of Maiasaurs, because I just finished writing it. I don't know what you're remembering.
Eric
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#18 2010-01-24 04:00:08
- Hakhazar
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Deja vu all over again, I guess. I'm enjoying it, regardless.
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#19 2010-01-30 17:00:11
- sverny
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Hurry up. I can't for new chapters. Bring on 4 !!!!!!
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#20 2010-01-30 20:09:24
- Eric Storm
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Re: Where the Maiasaurs Roam
All you've got to do to read chapter 4 is to become a donor. C'mon, it's only $6... (of course, I'll accept more, if you want to pay more... )
Or you can wait until it comes off PRM.
Eric
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#21 2010-01-31 00:23:22
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Loved chapter 4. can't wait until chapter 5!
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#22 2010-09-20 12:19:22
- Brijon158
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Any chance there is going to be a chapter five? This is one of my favorite stories.
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#23 2010-09-20 19:32:02
- Eric Storm
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Re: Where the Maiasaurs Roam
Chapter 5 is currently being written. If you want to keep track of which stories are really active, and which aren't, you should look at the "Writing Plans" thread in my section of the forum.
Eric Storm
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#24 2010-10-21 17:18:20
- Rhapsody4fire
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Awsome Chapter cant wait to see the next one, and to donate again
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#25 2010-10-21 18:44:18
- Eric Storm
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Re: Where the Maiasaurs Roam
Glad you're enjoying the story, and thanks for the feedback.
AND the donation.
Eric Storm
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