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Jason has something other kids don't. He doesn't understand what it is or how it works, but he's beginning to learn
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So far So good I like the premise and the flow. I also like that you are not describing the women like an AI body scanner, "5'6" 125 pounds 34D breasts". It feels more normal for a person.
(posted from Chapter One)
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Thank you for your remarks
I hope you like the story as it develops
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Hey! I paid good money for that AI body scanner for my stories! LOL
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Eric Storm wrote:
Hey! I paid good money for that AI body scanner for my stories! LOL
Eric Storm
I always preferred a hands on approach . . .
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You probably had more opportunities to apply the hands-on approach.
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I screwed up and posted a chapter from another story here.
Fixed now . . .
The real chapter four has been posted.
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