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CabinCruiser
Barb and her younger brother Tony...
One: consider thier options.
Two: Make a committment.
Three: Get really real.
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nice story, though the fornat is tedious, lot of blank space to scroll through made the dialog sort of hard to enjoy. Had to read is twice sometimes to stay involved. You o have a fun plot line developing and I can see this beong a long story. Just not so much space between the lines. Thank you.
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For the record, the problem is not their formatting, its their file type.
This is why such issues should be raised with the administration, not the author: I have the ability to figure out where the problem is. You may think the problem occurs because of "X", but often, like here, it actually occurs because of "Y".
I will contact the author directly to help work out this issue because, you're right: what's there right now is hard to read.
Eric Storm
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