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#1 2021-09-11 03:06:10

Bridget
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From: The Internet
Registered: 2006-09-09
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Watching Susie

Watching Susie

Look!  Up in the sky!

With a sizzle, boom, and flash a young man's life is forever changed


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#2 2021-09-11 03:09:23

Pleidius
Inebriated
From: four corners area, NM
Registered: 2021-06-09
Posts: 22

Re: Watching Susie

Something I wrote a few years ago.
Looking forward to your comments

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#3 2021-09-12 19:43:52

sermona
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Registered: 2019-02-18
Posts: 8

Re: Watching Susie

l like the mysterious faction. Makes a great suspense.  Can't wait to read more.

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#4 2021-09-24 10:15:23

sermona
Tipsy
Registered: 2019-02-18
Posts: 8

Re: Watching Susie

For me this chapter was a bit of anticlimax. the solution for the military seems rather rashly.
but i wonder whats the greater scheem/agende of the wachters. are the watchers realy that 'good'?

(posted from XI)

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