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#1 2018-09-19 03:24:51

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Cabal

Cabal

Mark Cabal is on a mission to save his eleven-year-old daughter Heather's life,  having exhausted all normal means at his disposal, desperate he turns to a mysterious stranger for aid, but what will it cost him?

This story will contain elements of Magic, MC, Inc, MF, Mf, Mg, and various combinations.

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#2 2018-09-19 03:39:28

James Marcus
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Re: Cabal

Great start.

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#3 2018-09-25 17:34:54

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Re: Cabal

Did we miss just the Chapter 3 or it is just a typo ??

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#4 2018-09-26 01:09:16

James Marcus
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Re: Cabal

No he wrote Chapter 4 intending it to be Chapter 3, then decided to write something in between turning Chapter 3 into 4. He is working on the new Chapter 3.

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#5 2018-09-26 01:31:22

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Re: Cabal

James is correct, Chapter four was originally going to be Chapter three but I had an inspiration while I was editing it.  so I have decided to place a Penelope focused chapter between 2 and 4.   I hope you are enjoying the story.

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#6 2018-09-26 17:11:25

lachiel.vaher
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Re: Cabal

Special Thanks to the person for the anonymous tip to change "Mondu" would be written "Mon Dieu".

I have corrected this in Chapter 4

will post chapter 3 soon, it's about 50% complete now.

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#7 2018-09-26 20:44:13

saurav_mystery1989
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Re: Cabal

Waiting for more and yes enjoying story so far.

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#8 2018-10-01 07:39:17

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Re: Cabal

Loving the story and the premise.  Keep it up - can't wait for more!

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#9 2018-10-04 01:48:53

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Finished what I think will be the final draft of Chapter 5 tonight.  going to sleep on it, give it a final editorial pass then post tomorrow.

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#10 2018-10-04 12:47:01

lachiel.vaher
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Re: Cabal

Sorry readers,

I have decided to postpone the posting of Cabal Chapter five.   
I am new to writing and still refining my editorial process.  Last night I received some valuable advice and I am going to incorporate it into my workflow. 

CH 5 is written, 
CH6 is 60-70%   

I will post Ch 5 "Easy Rider" as soon as I complete my new Editorial process, this is in an effort to tighten up my writing and deliver more value to you dear reader.

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#11 2018-10-07 03:44:21

Darkside_6
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Re: Cabal

Keep at it ... you have talent!

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#12 2018-10-10 03:31:40

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Re: Cabal

just finished the first draft of Chapter 6, it's darker, way darker than Chapter 3, but really sets us up for the conclusion of Act 1,  Will probably post sometime next week after I have had some time to fine tune it a bit.

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