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#326 2024-03-06 18:53:24
- darthel0101
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Re: Agent of Change
CetanTanka wrote:
Great story!! Looking forward to more!
I agree
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#327 2024-03-07 22:53:59
- darthel0101
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Re: Agent of Change
Eric, I just noticed something on my umpteenth readthrough of this chapter -- I am constantly re-reading your works due to the enjoyment that I get from them.
On the Sunday after Hannah's birthday, Jennifer rents a small moving van to move Hannah's stuff from the warehouse to the main house.
My question is: why rent a moving van when the Berculosi trucks are available to the owner of the company (and were used to get the Units to the city buildings just a short time before)?
(posted from Chapter 25)
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#328 2024-03-08 04:11:23
- Eric Storm
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Re: Agent of Change
Thank you for your question. I had, in fact, originally planned to use a BE truck. Here are the reasons I chose not to:
1. Hannah had two cars' worth of boxes. A rather small load for a box truck.
2. Jennifer is not used to driving a box truck, and is probably not comfortable doing so.
3. Money is not an issue for this family; the daily rental of a van is pocket change to them.
Truthfully, they could just have used the two cars again. The van was already overkill. But it made the process a little simpler.
Eric Storm
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#329 2024-03-08 06:03:44
- goldragon69
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Re: Agent of Change
Well going to comment on the latest chapter. Still great as always. Keep on keeping on.
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#330 2024-03-09 17:00:51
- thehilz
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Re: Agent of Change
Really enjoying the growth of the company. Will Nick be dealing with other politicians soon like maybe a state representative/senator?
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#331 2024-03-09 21:18:22
- Eric Storm
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Re: Agent of Change
If you've got ideas for things, you know my email address. 
Eric Storm
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#332 2024-03-09 21:50:29
- Icehawk101
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Re: Agent of Change
Thanks for the new chapter, it was great as always! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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#333 2024-03-14 18:41:54
- donkeyside6543
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Re: Agent of Change
I have read Agent of Change from beginning to end and I have enjoyed the theme, the interaction of the characters, and the plots and twists in the story. I feel it is to bad it has to be fiction we could use "SALT" to teach us some compassion and how to run our lives with out hate or anger. Of course the persona interactions of the cast was very riveting to say the least. A must read as far as i am concerned.
(posted from Chapter 27)
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