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#1 2006-12-03 23:24:21

Bridget
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Khartshma Legacy, The

Joshua learns that he is the heir to an ancient legacy. Now he must learn to control it before his enemies can strike.

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#2 2006-12-07 09:00:55

dracaiel
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

Excellent story.  I am looking forward to any updates you have.

I have not seen anything for awhile, everything OK?


Dracaiel

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#3 2006-12-08 05:11:42

Corvis
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

Thank you, Dracaiel.  I'm stuck on the current chapter, but I haven't given up.  I wish I could give you a certain date it will be ready, but I will keep at it.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#4 2006-12-08 20:46:49

dracaiel
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

As long as the story is finished before I croke I have no complaint 3dbig_smile.  I just get woried when authors that I like disapear, not many can get me a fix for my drug habit.


Dracaiel

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#5 2006-12-09 00:20:38

dv8n
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

I just wanted to tell you that I have enjoyed the story... I started reading it a little while back I guess because I haven't seen any updates since chapter 8. I had given up thinking you had stopped BUT I am happy to know I was wrong...please take your time and be happy with what you create   We will wait 3dsmile

Thank you for your time and creativity


:lol:

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#6 2006-12-09 00:33:31

dracaiel
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

dv8n wrote:

Thank you for your time and creativity

And any pain that you have recieved from banging your head when stuck.

Last edited by dracaiel (2006-12-09 00:33:46)


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#7 2006-12-09 01:44:24

dv8n
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

dracaiel wrote:

dv8n wrote:

Thank you for your time and creativity

And any pain that you have recieved from banging your head when stuck.

...and any time and hospital bills occurring from said banging and the blackouts that followed 3dbig_smile


:lol:

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#8 2006-12-10 04:33:04

Razer
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

Corvis, I loved this story and I reread the entire thing so I am waiting anxiously for any new chapters.  I'm glad you didn't give up on it.

Razer

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#9 2006-12-10 23:40:23

Exeter
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

Hello ,Just read at anothr site that you stpped  posting due to no feedback. Well here is some.... Great !!!!! story man, please post more,pretty please with sugar on top. Seriously , I used to never post because I dont type well( hunt n peck style)but after reading that I have to break that . Keep up the great work. Thanx

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#10 2006-12-10 23:51:43

Storymaster69
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

Exeter wrote:

Hello ,Just read at anothr site that you stpped  posting due to no feedback. Well here is some.... Great !!!!! story man, please post more,pretty please with sugar on top. Seriously , I used to never post because I dont type well( hunt n peck style)but after reading that I have to break that . Keep up the great work. Thanx

As nice as they are to get, most authors don't expect 1000+ word detailed feedbacks on the various nuances of the story.  Just knowing in a tangible way that readers are enjoying the stories like your "Great story" is often enough to keep us going.

Of course if an equally simply "Your story sucks!" comes through then please try to explain why you feel that way even if it is in point form.  How else do we get better.


Sex isn't the answer.
Sex is the question.
Yes is the answer.

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#11 2006-12-11 05:15:40

Khellendros
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

I just have to say that this has been one of my favorites for a while now. I really like your writing style. Keep up the good work.

Khellendros

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#12 2006-12-11 07:17:44

Corvis
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

goodness 3dsmile  Thank all of you for posting 3dsmile  It is well and truely appreciated.  Exeter, please don't be worried about your typing style.  You should see my work before it is edited 3dsmile  Yes, my editor is a true saint.

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#13 2006-12-18 19:10:34

Loki
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

I love the ideas for this story. The universe that you've created has so many possibilities. I've been waiting on more chapters from you for a long time. I think you do a good job explaining what could be difficult concepts well (mainly how the nordic pantheon is "organized and how the different pantheons can both exist) Keep up the good work.

(posted from Chapter 8)

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#14 2006-12-19 05:14:52

Corvis
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

Thank you, Loki.  Hope you don't mind the hard time your namesake has been having in TKL?  3dsmile
TKL is the most complex story I'm currently working on.  I know that I've made you wait far far too long for an update, and I am truly sorry to you and the other readers of TKL.  However, I have not and will not give up on this story. 

Thank you all for your patience and understanding.

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#15 2007-01-19 19:42:33

AnimaLynx
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Registered: 2006-12-18
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

Good to hear that you're still interested in writing this story!

I loved it (so far) by the way and hope to see more coming in the future (I need a double or triple daily FIX!)

ALx

"I have gone off to find myself. If I get back before I return, please keep me here."

Last edited by AnimaLynx (2007-04-30 05:24:32)

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#16 2007-07-13 01:00:51

Meebahd
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

Excellent story really am looking forward to the next chapter.Hope that you continue your great writings.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#17 2007-08-04 07:40:35

Corvis
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

thank you, Meebahd.  3dsmile  I'm glad that you are enjoying my story.  I hope my efforts in future do not disappoint.

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#18 2007-08-25 16:36:32

maintman02
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

I loved the book and cannot wait till chapter nine come out. You have created a really cool world. Keep it coming. thanks

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#19 2007-09-06 04:52:37

Corvis
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

Thank you maintman02.  Your comments are deeply appreciated.  3dsmile

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#20 2007-09-26 01:06:47

maintman02
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

I hate to ask this but is there a projected date when we will see an update to this story. I ask because I really like the story and would love to see the end of it.
thanks

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#21 2007-09-26 02:10:36

advancewar
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

me too me too:)


life=books

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#22 2007-12-05 06:26:43

bleme
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

I love this story and came close to doing bodily injury to my monitor when I noticed that the last update was a whole year ago.  Then I saw that you posted pics today so at least I know you are alive and kicking.....

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#23 2007-12-06 05:04:01

Corvis
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

Well, I'm still alive, not kicking so much though.  3dsmile  I'm happy that you are enjoying TKL, but please don't punch your monitor 3dsmile

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#24 2008-01-26 11:19:46

Alq
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

this is good are u writing more

(posted from Chapter 8)

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#25 2008-04-11 09:14:15

Alq
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Re: Khartshma Legacy, The

please please write more

(posted from Chapter 8)

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