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#1 2010-06-07 05:04:26

Bridget
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From: The Internet
Registered: 2006-09-09
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[BlackDragon] Kieran: the journey begins

[BlackDragon] Kieran: the journey begins

The year is 2199 yet much is as it was at the beginning of the 21st century with one major difference. Shortly after the turn of the century people began to manifest powers, some powers were used for good, some were used for great evil, many lives were lost in the struggle for domination and freedom. Eventually an equilibrium was struck as more and more people began to exhibit a wide variety of powers. A taskforce was established to deal harshly with any and all who would bring harm to those around them with their power, many years past and the occurrence of these would-be evil doers dwindled dramatically in the face of the harshest justice. People began to use their powers responsibly, and the need for such drastic measures was no longer called for. For the last 50 years there has been peace worldwide as nations drew together to work towards humanities benefit. Soon all this would change, and war would once again tear this world apart…

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#2 2010-06-07 18:48:35

Bd.Carlo
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From: B.C. canada
Registered: 2009-11-06
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Re: [BlackDragon] Kieran: the journey begins

well detailed, and nicely put together story,  some parts seemed stilted to me, but over all I liked it, and though that it was a good offering to the internet gods.  3dtongue

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#3 2010-06-10 03:00:01

lerris
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From: Huntsville
Registered: 2008-12-07
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Re: [BlackDragon] Kieran: the journey begins

I liked it alot. Very good plot line intersesting story. Definatley write more.

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#4 2010-06-15 22:27:38

Colorado
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From: Chillicothe, IL
Registered: 2007-09-11
Posts: 25

Re: [BlackDragon] Kieran: the journey begins

Can't wait for you to post your next chapter it has me on the end of my chair with anticipation.  Good luck and don't forget its always chaotic this time of year so stay safe. 3dtongue

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#5 2010-10-18 00:08:41

Lucky869
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Re: [BlackDragon] Kieran: the journey begins

Very good read.  Eagerly awaiting more 3dbig_smile

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#6 2011-03-18 06:41:52

Neitherspace
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From: Silver City
Registered: 2006-12-03
Posts: 574

Re: [BlackDragon] Kieran: the journey begins

a good start, I'd defiantly read more

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#7 2012-02-14 22:35:13

Frustratedfarmer
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Registered: 2010-05-29
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Re: [BlackDragon] Kieran: the journey begins

More? Please let there be more... Please!

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#8 2012-02-14 22:38:38

Eric Storm
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From: New Port Richey, FL
Registered: 2006-09-12
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Re: [BlackDragon] Kieran: the journey begins

Black Dragon has not decided to open an author account here at the Pub, and the Prospective Authors section is now closed, so unfortunately, there is unlikely to be more of this story here.  He is, perhaps, posting elsewhere.

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#9 2012-04-15 09:36:20

eragon921
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Registered: 2009-12-08
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Re: [BlackDragon] Kieran: the journey begins

Has anyone indeed found any more of Black Dragon's writings elsewhere? I've checked a couple places but haven't had any luck.

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